Throwies

[H3TT1NG3R]

[Darkeist]

shpel - fix your E
lasek - fix the k at the end. kinda throws it off.


and a self crit for me. the last R is kinda terrible.

[klic]

thanks for the crits guys...

seror - im not really feeling it, work on your letters some more, maybe a line or a dot or something would look better than the holes in your letters i dont know

lasek - youve been developing pretty good lately, id just fix your L up so it doesnt look like an I

bilnek - simples bro, read through the new to graff thread

ohsnap - looks pretty good, add some 3d and an outline to that and it would look sick

reken - youve got some pretty nice letters. the bottom right bar of the r on the bottom throw on the first flick

grfl - i dont see how that is an f. stick to the books for now, and id think about writing something else

gezr - nice letters, im not a fan of your g though

sarz - good flow, lose the random bump on the top left on your s

and like baron said, give crits if you want to get them

[klic]

thanks for the crits guys...

seror - im not really feeling it, work on your letters some more, maybe a line or a dot or something would look better than the holes in your letters i dont know

lasek - youve been developing pretty good lately, id just fix your L up so it doesnt look like an I

bilnek - simples bro, read through the new to graff thread

ohsnap - looks pretty good, add some 3d and an outline to that and it would look sick

reken - youve got some pretty nice letters. the bottom right bar of the r on the bottom throw on the first flick

grfl - i dont see how that is an f. stick to the books for now, and id think about writing something else

gezr - nice letters, im not a fan of your g though

sarz - good flow, lose the random bump on the top left on your s

and like baron said, give crits if you want to get them

bottom bump

[osnapizzel]

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ohsnap for the silver!

shpel keep working on it man, i would do a better critt but its to late and i need to go to bed

[whosthisguy]

snap, the squiggle in your S, i'd say put a little bit lower than that. i see what you're doing with the face, but i think it'd still work with the squiggle lower. also work on the N a little bit. and the P doesn't really fit with the rest of the letters.

[Bilnek]

How do ya mean letter structure????.... i am not very good with english :/
Klic-try to color it....try to color them even if u have crappy markers....
Darkiest-try 2 make bigger pics with thinner marker so u can better letterz
H3ttinger try to overspray that down blue lines.... it would look better without them..

[devil at sea level]

How do ya mean letter structure????.... i am not very good with english :/
Klic-try to color it....try to color them even if u have crappy markers....
Darkiest-try 2 make bigger pics with thinner marker so u can better letterz
H3ttinger try to overspray that down blue lines.... it would look better without them..

go to the new to graff thread, theres alot of helpful stuff in there to explain things..

[Darkeist]

klic - the reason i did the holes, was because when i posted before i was told to put holes in them. but whatever.

[ShIfTeD]

really shitty pics and really shitty quality stuff but whatev

[FlippingChickens]

snap the H needs work and that swiggle arrow on the s is weak

[soath]

Oh Snap! i said it out loud as soon as the picture loaded. the P is off, needs a lil somma somethin. I like the S.

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these dudes rule. *all those ups are dope tho. the purple fill is sorta ugh.

[FlippingChickens]

loool

yea idk wtf is so funny im just giving u shit to work on its better than saying ohsnap that shit looks fresh instead im giving u something to fuck with

[FlippingChickens]

i loled at you sayin the arrow on the s is weak. sketch spots have a funny way of making your shit look like crap, ill keep practicing and so should you

give me some pointers then cuh thats what im here for

[osnapizzel]

i see where you were going with the faces and they look pretty good but your letter structure is way off, like i cant read that. spend less time on colors and more time on letters

[ShIfTeD]

soath...thanks bro, yeah...i wasnt happy with the purple fill either...idk...for some reason, whenever i use any other color besides black and white my shit looks sketchy...idk...

osnap...i think your p fits, i jsut think you can do somthing way better with it, and dont change y0ur n, that shits dope....idk though man, i would condense it a little more because thats kinda long, like with my throws...i barely have enough to fill the throw, and trust me...you dont want to be lugging around 3 cans for a throw...try just osnap...cuz my throws are 5 letters long and it feels like im there forever doing it compared to my crew throws which take me like 3 miniutes

[osnapizzel]

ive gotten used to it, a fatcap and some bomber rustos is all it takes

[checkcheck]

pest-not a huge fan of the color. style is alright.
Ask-yeah i would change my name. I've had to before.
Soath-i like it stick with it.

[ShIfTeD]

i just started tossing this shit up and its a bitch because its either i have a quick shitty fill and i only use 1 can or i get a solid fill and it takes more then a can...but then again im a big motherfucker so its hard for me to do small throws

[osnapizzel]

what cap did you use to do those?