wow, everythings looking pretty good on this page
shayk- good start, id just fill in the shadow instead of that fill
bizar- looks tight, just neaten it up a bit
little rocky- fucking sick, cant think of any crits haha
sirap- my bad if i read it wrong, looks good
fucking around w/ a new 'a', i like it
^that A doesnt fit in with the rest your D looks like an O your R doesnt really fit in an your G is hard to decipher
Fuck off.
Seriously considering a name change.
Getrad- the Get half looks alright, but the Rad part looks like shit.
Yosh- Dope, but I think you should put some space in the middle of the Y.
Once- fuckin butter
Big blue looks good, fix the second n tho =D
I was Born Ready Mother Fucker...
Originally Posted by ErrorOner...
yea blunttokes that is kinda wack...no offence
once that looks pretty nice, it's different but nice.
crits *****s!
haha
and no offence but thats wack too
ya thats pretty whack
where u from bspolice?
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let me know what you think
-thanks
"alotta rappers on that murder shit and couldnt kill time"
den i really dont feel that style.. the way the d is and everythind basic letters?
I was Born Ready Mother Fucker...
That's the best shit I've seen from you man
That o is finally a round ass circle haha
But remember to give the crits to those above you
oh and do a little line in the middle of the e
Sounds stupid but it kills some of the dead space and makes things look better
new word SOHP...crits?
den-- bro you got some work.. even out the letter size a bit (the D versus all the rest) focus on your letter style, make the letters flow. and personally, me dont like the crosses in the letters, but thats your call. make the D look less like a N. simple simple simple.
OENE-- good simples, try working on adding your own style tho. but keep it basic, just fuck with the letters some. not bad, but not really good either.
been drawing and shit want some crits reeal bad.
2letter throw
4letter throw
CRITS
CRITS
CRITS
clean up the stray lines and loops in ur letters and itll look alrite...
mare i like that hit me up for an exchange
you mean ware? or someone else..
lol ya ware, im too high for this shit
aight i PMd you
moonboots- pretty clean, nice simple style. but almost too simple (in my opinion). mess with the letters a little and shit. keep structure. etc etc.
Throw for a battle no one entered.
rabid nice simples
crits -
like it better with or without the e or e and s
your throw looks like a side view of a really shriveled pennis. lolz. like it better without the S.
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