Throwies

[white]

graffdabusup - dig da pink
fitzy - does everyone have that damn K (including me)

crits -

second one i was way drunk so sorry about the fill....



some shit from last week i wanted to repost

[BigBlueViolence]

Let a homie get some crits?

[shayk]

crits plz god knows i need them

[Blox]

Ya give em to get em boys.
Don't just come on here expecting people to crit your shit.
No disrespect, Just filling your guys in.

And yo, Nukes, Your right man, Your Ks are SO much alike,
One of you should change that shit up, Its not like you chomped eachother, But still.
Originality yo.

[graffdabusup]

violence- raw n
senk- change up the k


crits appreciated???!!!????!!!

[B.S. POLICE]

looks better

[BigBlueViolence]

Graffdabus- Dope, man. I'd just mave that V shaped thing in the Y a space in the letter, though

[ShaolinNy]

violence- raw n
senk- change up the k


crits appreciated???!!!????!!!

Looking ill nice job.

[milk boxx]

quick hollow

[white]

Ya give em to get em boys.
Don't just come on here expecting people to crit your shit.
No disrespect, Just filling your guys in.

And yo, Nukes, Your right man, Your Ks are SO much alike,
One of you should change that shit up, Its not like you chomped eachother, But still.
Originality yo.

ya my only prob is that i cant develope K's for shit i suck bad and a shit load of people that have K's in their name have that K

[weakfingers]

Aight, from what blox said above me about giving crits to get them, well... here they go.

Abor- I really like that seperated style and theres 2 guys doing that in my area and it looks so fresh, That being said I would only do the three dot holes on some of the letters. The seperated B is really nice and it fits the style but I would have to say make the leg on you're R look like its attached because it looks abit off to me.

Facedorateur- You're off to a good start just keep on working out small kinks and shit BUT PLEASE take out the face, it looks super dumb and like face's only look good in well done bombs(In my own opinion).

Senkz- Get rid of that one spike because it looks really out of place with the whole style of letters in the bomb.

Milk Boxx- That shits tight, keep it up.


Phew, With all those crits done heres a new throw i was working on.

Crits?

[milk boxx]

quick hollow

new page bizzzzzump
crits?
i'm liking that sike stuff. keep it up man.
skwint, looks like a good start to a nice throw.

[ShaolinNy]

weakfingers-looking good but the k looks like an H just fix the letter up a little.
milkbox-Im liken it good shit
shayk-your getting there,keep working on it




Here mine crits please, its a little sloppy.

[Cesk]

For above:

3d is shit and the E is sketchy, the rest seems pretty nice imo.

[luster]

skwint-that shit looks tight
milk boxx- i like it alot just not feeling the first e too much..just my 2 cents tho
shaolin-its a good start not feeling the n but just keep working on it
cesk-like you already said 3d is off and the e


i was too lazy for 3d..and fill is shit too..
crits?

[a4w.dinak]

crits....

dope, the ones u colored in were clean, and ur hand styles are pretty good

[Wallace]

sacwacko - the 2nd and 3rd ones are nice, put them up
luster- not a fan not sure why, smooth the letters out a little maybe
cesk- try to go a little simpler, 3d makes no sense as well
milk boxx- nice base, keep working with it should get better and better
ShaolinNY- keep workin
weakfingers- work on the I and W then i think it could be looking real clean
graffdabusup- im realllyyy liking your most recent one, fix the U up and its good to go

what ive been putting up recently'

[Bink1]

dfians-dope stuff especialy 2 letter
skwint-nice
wallace-that S is tight , but why only 1 letter? woulda look moreb tter if 2

[Wallace]

spanks, it is a two letter though.

"So"

try to make your T and R look more like a t and r. the r looks like a lowercase e

[Bink1]

ahh im a goon - its tight tho.
crits on mine