Throwies

[fitzy36]

some shit i'm trying out crit.? just trying new things

yo any one have any ideas of developing anything else out of these letters cuase i've been trying to make it more unique and shit but i'm just stuck....

[NoCanControl]

is it officall throwie tiem nao? throwies for the like the past two pages

edit.



HAHAHAH. i thought i was in the black book, tots. sorry. hahahah.

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

wallace- looks good post a colored one
sare- dont feel the s
blink- make ur t a t

[Keke]

[yortseD.eht.hturT.]

likin the E R

[Keke]

likin the E R

its an "A"
/cry

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

maybe u should make it an er ..lol looks good tho

[B.S. POLICE]

keke thats nice keep working on that

[Zarb]

crits?

[Wallace]

sarz- keep workin on it and clean it up
keke- find a way to close up that e, good start
zip- go simple and fix up the z and i

more pen shit

[Den1]

wallace-i like it
zip- fix up the z and the p and forget the face on the i for now till you have something solid

[IMG][/IMG]

crits please

[Worms]

the fills shitty on purpus so ges can see hes been hit

[ShaolinNy]

crits please.i know overal it came out like complete shit espicaly the E i fucked up but considering the fact that this was my 1st throwie ever and it was pitch black and i coundent see shit i dont think it was that bad of a job.Crits would be helpful!(Def would of done better if i couild see wat i was doing)





wallace-good shit im liken that s alot
zarb-your Z kinda looks like an S,work on your letters more
den-Idk not really feeling the e & n

[Keke]

^^^ make sure to keep the bottom of your letters level and make them a little cleaner, the style of the letters are great just a little poorly executed, ^^^^

[BigBlueViolence]

Keke, Wallace, Worms- dope
Sneak- You've got the same problem I had forever, take extra care to make sure your letters are straight, and try to reduce the strokes in each letter to 1 or 2.




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[Worms]

shaoline... u need to do ur lines in one try... that means getin ur throw down on paper and being able to do it by second nature... then wen u get to a wall just think bigger.... same shit but biggeer... also can control plays a part in how shit comes out

[Zarb]

I changed up the Z
crits?

[weakfingers]

Okay first, here's my rambalings.

Wallace- I really like the one liner S. It will look good in a hollow throw but it might be abit hard to do with a fill unless you can go over your original outline again but yeah its looking really clean.

Den- The style is super simple and its looking clean but in my opinion the n looks abit sharp with that smooth style so I would round it out abit to match the others.

Worms- I really like the S you did, I havent seen a s like that but the top and bottom curve seems abit small to me.

ShaolinNY- I'm basicly going to say what others have said, keep your letters with minimal lines so you dont have lines that dont meet up and work on a solid throw with all the same letter size before you go paint. If you do feel the urge to practice with a can, I would suggest going to a low key small bridge in your town that has nothing on it and if it does make sure your not going over anyone important in your area.

Zarb- I think your Z as well as the rest of it had those added curve things that changed the structure so much I couldent tell what it said at first glance, Keep it more simple and it should be looking good in no time.


As for me I just tried to get more of the same letter style into my throw,

Any things I should change? Oh and i know my K looks like an H, I'm gonna try to fix that.

[ShaolinNy]

Thanks for the crits everyone I will work on it on paper till I got it down pat


Weakfinger~its looking real good just got to make your k better and your t reminds me of an r every time I look at it,other than that good shit

[HalfGangstaShit]

A little critiscism?

thnks