Throwies

[Blox]

Your getting way to technical Reel.
With the shadowd hand styles, and the bubble backgrounds, and the open R's/
Just take er way more simpol man.

[peacebomb]

[SONE.]

drop what ever is on top of ur letters. the lil rectangle thing

[dogowar]

yeah soop drop those liitle things on the top, are they ment to look like bombs?. And make the holes in the o and p diffrent im not likeing them were they are. Plus your P looks a bit like and e. But you do have the same style flowing through all your letters which is good.

[capy]

sick its very bad.
wone-start out giving crits and stop postin these pieces in throwies thread, just burn these pages.

whats so bad about it pls tell me so i can improve
ps my name isn't sick its capy

[Bink1]

imrove it by lookin in new to graff thread or look at sum flicks of throwies to get some inspiration, looks like u dont get it for now.

[ShaolinNy]

Im messin with a new name Dent,Did this in the dark since my lights are broke in my room lol


Crits?

[sellers E.]

[WikedRequiem]

back to the drawing board.......

[weakfingers]

Daylo- I dont know if you know about this marker but you basicly stole the name www.youtube.com/watch?v=aZgdnEquEZk . They spell it Dalo. Other then that for starters I'd looze the x things and just do circles.

ShaolinNY- That shadow is mad wack, its chillen on the top and bottem. Work on making the letters the same size and not letting them grow/shrink throughout the throw.

Aight then, I've been trying to work on new style for the past 2 weeks and come-up with straight shitty throws and went back to a simple bubble look and tried to fix up a couple letters. Can any body give me some help on what to do with my T?

[pandemik]

skwint, man ive really liked your stuff except for the t, which isn't too bad, i just don't dig it man. Other than that, I like it.

[weakfingers]

Tell me about it, I find them so weird in throws,
The problem with my T is I dont like bringing it out to show the other side because I get a lot of dead space and the whole flow of the bomb is off-set. So I'm still working on fixing it and any suggestions on how I would re-arrange shit would be greatly apreceated.

[ShaolinNy]

Tell me about it, I find them so weird in throws,
The problem with my T is I dont like bringing it out to show the other side because I get a lot of dead space and the whole flow of the bomb is off-set. So I'm still working on fixing it and any suggestions on how I would re-arrange shit would be greatly apreceated.

you can try and do sumthin like my t

[Queezy]

Make the top bar of the T short 'n fat, and the bottom like the s.

[mtown]

[Bink1]

Daylo- I dont know if you know about this marker but you basicly stole the name www.youtube.com/watch?v=aZgdnEquEZk . They spell it Dalo. Other then that for starters I'd looze the x things and just do circles.

ShaolinNY- That shadow is mad wack, its chillen on the top and bottem. Work on making the letters the same size and not letting them grow/shrink throughout the throw.

Aight then, I've been trying to work on new style for the past 2 weeks and come-up with straight shitty throws and went back to a simple bubble look and tried to fix up a couple letters. Can any body give me some help on what to do with my T?

just rip off the T , if u dont like that letter why u should write it? well Skwin sounds cool.

[B.S. POLICE]

[bak]

skwint try and curve the arm of the t so it connects with the dot at the bottom

[Zarb]

new name

dont know if im gonna keep it yet, how is it?
dent- make your n smaller but it looks pretty good i think
skwint- much better except the t

[smooth_nuts]

doing some dead cans..