ive youre going for bubbly you should round out the T more. and that N need serious work. the bottom legs are too stubby.
ive youre going for bubbly you should round out the T more. and that N need serious work. the bottom legs are too stubby.
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i really like the t.
veser, work on those letters in the book a bit more homie..
that looks like a dope place to paint though
and thanks big blue!
damn milk boxx that shits nice
crits?
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what's up with the line on the a going into the h?
i dont know just thought it gave it a lil more style and it makes it easyer to tell its an a but thats just me
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drop the black space in the K. no other letter has it. make it just a line coming up and over.
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toy throwup battle callout
Word:Evil
Deadline:March 15th
Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
Pm all your entries to Smooth_nuts
pm your entries to smooth_nuts
werd i know what you mean s one
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SNOT
you didn't take my crits man, except for the overlapping part.
LOSE THE HUGE HOLE IN YOUR O
THE BAR THAT CURVES BACK INTO YOUR S ON THE BOTTOM LOOKS LIKE A TUMOR, fix that shit.
your N is ew, but it's better than all the other letters? So just try out different letters if you'd like.
snot- the bottom of ur s is lookn weird and the tops of ur n are kinda lookin pointy.
shayk. the bottoms of the AYK in the throw are all shorter than the first 2 letters. work on proportioning. sometimes i take a ruler and make 2 parallel lines and fit my letters inbetween em. practice that a lot and ull start to see em even out when u free hand it.
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yeah i dont get how to close off the s without making that thing come out
shayk - i say you take that dead space in the K away, maybe round your letters a bit more, but yeah its lookin pretty good
snot - change the S and take the big hole out of the O and change the T so it is more compact and doesnt look like an R
sizuuurp - they're good but they could look better, loose some of the huge bubbles and swirls
Eh kinda sketchy.Crits please!!Any tips for shadow?
Sizz-Shits tight,Just kinda hard to see what your name is
shayk-Make your letters more even/level
Snot-take advice given above
Last edited by ShaolinNy; 03-11-2009 at 06:44 PM.
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