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[Apocalypse]

Exactly, but literally right after i posted it you bitched.
I wasn't done writing all my crits

Sorry mang, no beef, just wanted to see you give them if ur asking for em....nevermind it all.

[-ESO-]

Sorry mang, no beef, just wanted to see you give them if ur asking for em....nevermind it all.

no problem man.

[weakfingers]

Less talk more flicks, heres a boxy style/really out of proportion throw that i was messing around with... needs alot of work.

[bulltimeJAMP]

you guys are retarded. didk riding is when you suck up to other writers DUMBASSES.

[oxiclean]

you guys are retarded. didk riding is when you suck up to other writers DUMBASSES.

Whats a didk?

[Apocalypse]

you guys are retarded. didk riding is when you suck up to other writers DUMBASSES.

It's called respect, we're all trying to do the same thing, no reason to start fucking beef idiot...

[ASTAR.DWSP]

you guys are retarded. didk riding is when you suck up to other writers DUMBASSES.

dude.. writers should all work together.. not fuck each other up.. times have changed.. we must unite and let the world know we are here to stay.. and they need to deal with it..

[provinT13]

my k is brutal



provin - good job practicing it on plywood or whatever first, try an uppercase E and a lower case n

Thanks.

I'd say you got some nice, consistent, stuff. Time to move on?? You seem to have simple throwies and tags down.

And to everyone that is bitching, leave all the fucking chit chat to the chit chat thread, post flicks, give and get crits, and get the fuck out, there are actually people that wanna see some posts with helpful advice

[Hammertime]

The letters COULD mean something but it's actually rather because I like these forms. The 'S' I've practiced a lot, the p and the m almost not. I don't consider this finished, nor the way I want it (the shadow is mediocre/bad, the bubbles on top suck ass)
Constructive criticism would be very much appreciated.

[DirtyDozen520]

^i dont really like the middle/bottom of the M..those grey things on the top of the letters looks weird. I mean if you did it all around the letters, it might look kool. but idk
and SPM is a rapper

[Hammertime]

Thanks for the reply, I completely agree!

[walkingcarpet]

I like the S, Hammertime but I would lose the bubbles on the top or maybe just, as DirtyDozen said, put it all around the letters. The top mart of the M looks a little wierd to me, maybe make the two top parts of the M equal?

[Five Sixx Ace]

quick one becuase im bored. working on making them the same size.

hammertime- work on not having so much dead space going on in the m.

[bulltimeJAMP]

Whats a didk?

It's called respect, we're all trying to do the same thing, no reason to start fucking beef idiot...

etc.. you guys are idiots read what went on before my post.

ie. people using the term dickriding as if it meant insulting.

[JasK]

The letters COULD mean something but it's actually rather because I like these forms. The 'S' I've practiced a lot, the p and the m almost not. I don't consider this finished, nor the way I want it (the shadow is mediocre/bad, the bubbles on top suck ass)
Constructive criticism would be very much appreciated.

The M seems way too square compared to the S and the P. And boxes don't look good unless the rest of it is relatively boxy, which you won't get with an S like that.

[-Dank-DK-]

[JasK]

Like no flow here. The letters don't flow well, the colors are bad.
Whatevs. Needs work for sure, man.

[ASTAR.DWSP]

Like no flow here. The letters don't flow well, the colors are bad.
Whatevs. Needs work for sure, man.

fix the J and the K the

J looks like a blob..

K needs the the right leg extended and the right arm..

[-Dank-DK-]

i fucking forgot the fucking m in shriiimp lol but i still like it

[ASTAR.DWSP]

i fucking forgot the fucking m in shriiimp lol but i still like it

oww that fill makes my eyes bleed..