one thing....dont write alone...theres already a very accomplished writer with that name...Originally Posted by ALA!
second time using paint :/
critiques?
Heres a Throwie i did for a friend that writes BOND....ant Critz?
one thing....dont write alone...theres already a very accomplished writer with that name...
second time using paint :/
critiques?
Heres a Throwie i did for a friend that writes BOND....ant Critz?
that first one is the best, who said it was the worst?
That n is fat
Alone-Name is already taken
Deco-Like the N. B seems like its missing something.
Pootie-Looks good. Props for using paint.
Did this VERY quickly.
Constructive Citicism Please?
workin out the kinks...
your h looks alot like your k for some reason
h's and k's are pretty muck the same thing
ye but the edges of k's have to stick out more or h's have to stick out less
I'm pretty sure theres a lot of accomplished writers with my name. but seeing how i like my name (been writing it for almost half a year) and it means something to me, along with the fact that it's technically AL-one and i live in a small, suburban, graffiti-deficient town, I think I'll keep it. I surmise it would be difficult to find a decent name not comprised of random letters that isn't used by at least one other person in the world.
can get some feedback on my technique rather than name?
-chump, I'm really diggin that. pootie ur shit is nice as well.
deco that bond throw is fresh man
just some battle words
crits?
Last edited by osnapizzel; 05-22-2008 at 08:15 PM.
idk throwies idk
DAMN CRIEG ya ya DIG{PGK}
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Chump- that throwie is sweet, I just think the leg on the k is too thin, and the bottom of the s is kind of awkward tooking, you should try to smooth it out a bit
don't like the outline.Alone-Name is already taken
Deco-Like the N. B seems like its missing something.
Pootie-Looks good. Props for using paint.
Did this VERY quickly.
Constructive Citicism Please?
other than that, it looks pretty good.
osna- i think those are pretty sick, but i might make the O a little smaller on "group"
PM me if you are in or near the portland metro area.
bump
give crits to get crits in the toy forum.
this is my first attempt at a throwup i just started any criticism?
haha yah i dont even like the outline either.
i was gonna shade then i got lazy, and just drew lines around it.
evade- Keep workin on it. Change up your "d". You'll get alot better.
go simple bubble letters my crappy graff clone! MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
crits??
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