queezy ur e's are lookin nice and da ur throw has potential, just keep workin on it....
fuck sometimes i hate givin crits it makes me feel all snobby and shit like "ooh you should do this ooh you should do that, i know best" lol, but i like getting them =)
anyways..
i write lerch, not lerc, but im stuck for an h
Is that in ms paint? Why not pratice on paper or atleast a white board
get rid of the thing above the eOriginally Posted by expozay
crits?
I'm feeling that shit, lerch.
Sadly, I can not say that for anything else on this page.
sorry, moving to blackbook thread.
Last edited by provinT13; 03-18-2009 at 12:44 PM.
its an accented e, part of the word.
currently listening:
you should be too.
One more bump.
bigblue fresh
the fill got fucked cuz i had to do the outline first with a sharpie, then the the silver fill with a paint marker
uhh
looks like you're trying to bite too much.
it's real sloppy.
your Z looks like it has down syndrome.
don't like the hole in the O... or the shape of the O.
not sure what im tryin bite. and no shit its sloppy the silver covers the red and fucks up the outline
uhh
calm down sir, I'm giving you crits.
well I've seen those letters before, it just looks like you bent them(the I and the E).
and the two letters that I haven't seen look baaaad.
why do you have your I on top of your Z? it's unnecessary and no lookey good.
just try keeping your letters going straight, and the same size.
and take that huge hole out of the O...bout it.
Last edited by sallybsk; 03-18-2009 at 03:53 PM.
if you already knew it was sloppy then why would u post something u dont think looks good
new throww anythingg i should change on itt just made it todayy
DENAS..sT..RyL..Opk
kJay- as said before just clean that shit up its pretty sloppy, and id say have more of a round O than a square O like the one you have there.
dena- looks dope dude, i like the S a lot but i think the D could be cleaned up a bit
lol it says de
DENAS..sT..RyL..Opk
oh true haha it looks like an S man, maybe make the middle part of the E a little smaller, kinda hard to see
yaa i can see the s your talking about it depends on the angle you look at itt haha
DENAS..sT..RyL..Opk
haha yeah for sure dude
crits? my A is fucked
Big Blue- So sick
Kjay- I like the I and E but work on the Z and O
BigBlue-I enjoy the sharp handstyle.
Zarb- Work on the shadow its abit off
I got bored (pun intended)
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