Throwies

[-Dank-DK-]

[B.S. POLICE]

mone-i like your simplee nott your throwiee soo much thoughh
bigbluee-i like your a and r butt your e needs work
crits??

this can really be something, just keep practcing your lines are too shaky

[Sizzuurp]

ur gettin much better zarb keep at it. i like the period better than the o. ur L needs some tweakin along with the rest of ur letters, but keep at it/

i really like that DE its lookin raw as hell. but yea your lines could be smoother.

[EST2007]

still workin on my throw, ehhhhh still needs work

[EST2007]

eh havent written in a while decided to fill one in.Crits please!

i dont mean to shit on you, but it looks like ur trying too hard to emulate cliche bubble bottomed letters. the S needs to lose the hard angled tumor, since your letters are really rounded it downst flow. the K also needs a lot of work and it too needs to lose the tumor.

[EST2007]

ight, thanks dudes.

trying it out...

def has potential, R is mad weak tho

[EST2007]

i like ur throw but i hate that E, and it seems like everyone uses it. dont make the bobble on the N so big, it draws attention from the other letters. i'd make it the same size as the S's bottom bubble if that makes sense

[EST2007]

imo simples like this i dont consider throws. too many corners and angles. you should be able to bust out a throw just like BAM

but for what it's worth, ur letters have good structure. clean simple bars

[EST2007]

love it.... BUT i dont like how the cut into the N is so deep, and on the N the bottom is pointy, but none of the letters are like that, fucks with the flow

[EST2007]

check up on that A. JA got that A on lock already

[shayk]

you shuld probly put your paint on lock "JA"

[B.S. POLICE]

your retarded that is ja on the pics

[Juicee]

your retarded that is ja on the pics

i lol'd hahahahahahha

also shayk, your flow is pretty bad; it looks like you took an hour to do that lol..
imo you should work on making your letters less blocky and makin it flow right

[Bink1]

wtf shayk, u didnt knew who JA was? (u prolly know now -.-)

[EST2007]

I lol'd...

[B.S. POLICE]

the whole fuckin world lol'd, cept for ja...

[BigBlueViolence]

Yeah, he took a hit of rock.

[B.S. POLICE]

true story

[bulltimeJAMP]

happened to a friend of a friend of mine.

[PaKt PaKt]

Just trying out a new throwie. Just wanted to know how you all felt about it. Thanks in advance for any crits and advice.