yo stussy its cool that i use that smile thing right
yo stussy its cool that i use that smile thing right
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hell ya im liking all those
The E on the JES is toooo dopoe
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Originally Posted by Vagrant
i hate dumbasses like you who bump the same picture on the same page, dont give one crit, and still wonder why they havnt gotten any crits
lask - the top of your letters are too big
reach - try cleaning your lines up some, keep working on it
izoe - not feeling your i, make it wider and just have a normal circle as your dot, and dont cut off each part of your E
rayz - round out the top of your Y, because that one part is pointed and everything else is rounded, know what i mean? and your z looks kinda plain compared to your other letters
em - not feeling the "fart cloud"
shayk - looks too square-ish
meko - fresh, you forgot the shadow on the inside of your k haha
my k still looks like shit but whatever
yo klic
what about my new throwie lol
yea dude i dont care... im not the first to use a smile on a letter... just dont copy mine, use it as a influence on your OWN smile... get me?
k i just dont like taking some ones shit with out seeing if they care
Yo klic i dont shadow the inside of my k.... Ha
Rays- Dope. thicken up the leg on the left.
Kja- Not feeling the I
Last edited by BigBlueViolence; 03-24-2009 at 11:21 PM.
uhh what does it say, oasc? its getting better, the shadows off on the teardrop things, what do you think of mine?
the only reason i didnt crit other peoples shit is cause i felt like i wasnt good enough to crit people better than me. im new to this site, dont hate.
lurkist-clean as hell
klic-i like it, but the J, A, and N are kinda plain. loose the random line coming out of your k.
bigblue-dope.
i know mine is shit.... crit it?
sellers i seriously dont kno even what it says.. go back to making each letter easily recognizable no funk attached.
janek once again keep movin that way. make the k the same size as the rest but i like it keep it up. oh and stop cheating with the bottom of the page. you need bottoms to those letters hahha.
for bins.
yo klic i relly dont like the boxxy letters but thats just me
just keep workin on it
LilRocky- Sexy.
Sellers- The only two letters I could even tell what they were, were the last two.
Dank- I liked the throw without the character better.
Izoe-(this is coming a bit late) It seems to me that the "I" style doesn't fit with the rest of the letters.
Janek- not diggin the e or k.
Lurkist- Damn sexy.
Alright I'll admit it. I'm biting a little bit with the highlights on the first one. I probably won't keep that.
yo rocky
that second one is dope man
im diggin it
rocky- nice job . ur G is too close to your U but its a fresh as hell simp. i dont like the N in the second throw and ur last throw is fire
pakt- i like it. the colors are hot . second ones too sloppy
i write DAK..crits anybody??
everyone is doing pretty good..but daylo stop painting and hit the books..
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