yo drk thats pretty fresh
u should paint it then post it
yo drk thats pretty fresh
u should paint it then post it
stupid silver ate up all my black paint...and i thought i was usin a new elmers cap but it was a stoner thin...
Late nights, early mornings.
Originally Posted by Mr yarbles
yo sp its still dope
its an a homie, DAK but yeah i will paint it this week sometime...
most my stuffs been quite similar, but the i is just raised up a lil bit. (on the bottom ones)
lemme know what u think of the two slightly different styles.
error oner- i ddig it
dak- i reaaaly dig it
pakt- its cool, but see how it looks when u make the right side of the "t" stick out a lil more
lilrocky- dope simp and nice throws
bigblue- dope
klic- its comin just keep at it
Last edited by KJay; 03-26-2009 at 05:39 PM.
uhh
Izoe- looks ok, i like the top z's alot more
Sp-looks pretty good
Dak-Your a looks like a r, its alright otherwise
Heres a quick throw. Says sneaz. I'm not sure if i'm gonna write it, i'm messing around with a lot of words.
Izoe- I like the bottem left the most
Izoe - Everything is nice except for the E, it doesn't flow with the rest of your throw. Simplify it a bit.
Sneaze - I like it, just pack the S in more tight
Zarb - whats that even say? Lasr? Make everything more proportionate
Nice E, not feeling the S or the K at all tho, rest is nice. Ive seen your other shit, its pretty tight. is that your char? its dope
Says Brent
Last edited by Steele; 03-25-2009 at 08:50 PM.
Ain't feelin the "R". Pretty clean though.
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Crits?
Last edited by Hyphy; 03-26-2009 at 01:03 AM.
Reach of KTO.
Reach- everything looks alright, except your R.
It's hurting, dude.
I like the R on Brent. That's a pretty cool style you got there.
eskimo2 - I really like the placement of the character on the wall and IMO I think it looks really good, and I like how you seperated the bottem right leg of the K from the rest of the letter but saying that it does look like a lower case R with a period. If you worked on it and tweaked it that would look super sick.
I was learning highlights today and did a sloppy throw. (missed a couple of places with the white highlight)
kritz!
kjay and steele thats dope, i like the character
and weakfinger your bubble letters have a nice flow
never mind all
crits? throw and bomb
kjay-i really like it.
oxi-looks good.
zarb-dope.
eskimo-the character is dope.
steele-i like it.
hyphy-your r needs work.
weak-dope.
goober-loose that circle on the j...
sloopy throw i did,
crits??
if that character on the left is your.good job i love it.but on the k.and i know youve heard this alot already but...i think it would look better if it was the leg and the arm or whatever was connected.thats the only thing i would change....
edit: i have horrible grammar .
syrup in my cup maayne hold up.]
sellers E. - The "D" doesn't match the other letters' style. The "A" looks wack with the middle line and the bump. The "S" is slanted too much. Is that a "C" or a "L"? The "O" looks like a "D". Keep workin on it bro.
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I need help with my "R"...any tips?
Reach of KTO.
i write DAK..crits anybody??
everyone is doing pretty good..but daylo stop painting and hit the books..
besides saying my a looks like an r any more crits?? Im thinking about running the line in the middle of the a down past the swoop that makes it look like and r...
give advice ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
dank: straighter, and fatter
DAK: Make the top of your D like all the other letters. and lose the little nipple on the bottom of your K
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