Blunttokes-Hollow on a freight? I'm not one to say shit for a writer thats been doing it longer then me but c-mon you can do alot better.
ReallyTrustFullStrangers-I like your R in your book its really original.
Sellers-I dont really like the second and third letter but that just my opinion, I prefer simple throws.
Plan- I really love that throw, and the shine is so skinny, what cap did you use?
Zarb- Do you write lag? I can't tell if the middle is an A and the last letter is an s or an g.
Mith Hovz- I really liek your first one, I like the style and flow
Vader-I just will say do another E its to small for the throw but thats in my opinion.
thanks for the crit, i fucked up on those letters. painted it again today and they looked better.
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