Throwies

**weakfingers** · 05-13-2009 09:47 PM

Yeah, its super basic but I think alot of new writers that come here would progress alot faster if they go overly simple then develop from there instead of trying a crazy throw... Kind of like the saying: "Crawl before you walk".

**skull-e** · 05-13-2009 10:13 PM

Originally Posted by Zarb

If your saying that my shit is ok enough to start puttin up In not too high profile spots then I'll post some shit this weekend or the next. I just don't wanna look like an idiot out on the street. so I've been taking my time.

Originally Posted by Zarb

Sorry I didn't type clearly enough in my opinion. Now if this little feud with us is over how about you tell me how to structurally get better and not give me orders.

Don't be such a fucking smartass.

**Zarb** · 05-13-2009 10:30 PM

Hahaha alright man whatever. All I told your boy to do was stick to the books, I already admitted that I made it sound to much like an order. Just stop already.

**Gezra** · 05-13-2009 11:39 PM

yee ha

im not too toy but this thread is popular so i need some crits holmes.

**CrustOner** · 05-13-2009 11:43 PM

not too toy, you say?

**BigBlueViolence** · 05-13-2009 11:45 PM

I agree with him,
but the G E looks like a capital A without further inspection.
I'd separate the too, otherwise it's nice

KRE1 · 05-13-2009 11:47 PM

crit tha shit outta it

**CrustOner** · 05-13-2009 11:50 PM

it's Ewok with an R...

**..romero..** · 05-13-2009 11:52 PM

Originally Posted by Gezra

yee ha

im not too toy but this thread is popular so i need some crits holmes.

instead of ripping you a new one or flaming your vids like i did on youtube(until you blocked me that is) im going to give you some actual crits.one.get off this im not to toy shit.becuase you are.sorry.its the truth.like i said before.make the E round on the bottom and not a point.it doenst flow at all.neither does that A.which you should drop.the g is dope buuuuut yeah.it doesnt flow with those letters at all.you really need to work on that shit.ill do a throw for you just becuase i have nothing better to do really.also work on thedropshadow.its a littleoff.

**CrustOner** · 05-13-2009 11:54 PM

Holy shit, it's... THAT gez? DirectAdvertisement?!

I FUCKING HATE YOU

**BigBlueViolence** · 05-14-2009 12:09 AM

Haha, the fact that you don't paint that throw on the streets makes me retract my previous statement,
You are THE biggest toy on the forum.

KRE1 · 05-14-2009 12:17 AM

was any of that directd at me ... ?

btw workin out a K to replace tha R but tha R is sumthin i need work on so i decided to try it and practice it

**expozay** · 05-14-2009 02:38 AM

drunk.dark.

**skull-e** · 05-14-2009 07:19 AM

very.
dark.

**weakfingers** · 05-14-2009 08:26 AM

FIXED! oh and your M in the handy is definatly a W.

**BigBlueViolence** · 05-14-2009 10:00 AM

Originally Posted by BigBlueViolence

Cust- not really feeling it, the C would look dope if you made the left side thinner, and bring the line in the U all the way down, and loose the L shape

bump

Expo, my man, I realy think you should stick to marker tags for a while.
That shit is shiesty looking.

KRE1 · 05-14-2009 10:22 AM

Originally Posted by KRE1

crit tha shit outta it

bump

**ReallyTrustFullStrangers** · 05-14-2009 10:26 AM

Originally Posted by Zarb

If your saying that my shit is ok enough to start puttin up In not too high profile spots then I'll post some shit this weekend or the next. I just don't wanna look like an idiot out on the street. so I've been taking my time.

see, this is why i like you man. ur smart. othere toys on here just go out and paint in eye view stupid hot spots wen they suck. ur smart ur doing what i did. dont paint till you got a solid thorw down. just keep practicig.

emik. stick to books and tags a lil bit longer.....