i write ZEST 1.
rayz-lookin great, i like the throwie
zest-can use some work, but i like the fill in
crits. gotta new name. SCEL
scel ur shading could use a bit more work...maybe try some on the bottom and less on top (look at stussy's above u). and ur e kinda through me off, thought it was another c.
Thx for tha crits guys,
CYBE: bubble it up, make it pop, think bubble gum
RAYZ: awsome, maybe add something to the Z
SCEL: use a bigger marker (idk why) and keep your letters the same size
If anybody has a tip on how to do an F that would flow with that style, plz tell me.
Love Me Do
the first two, well, its just me, i like nice roound letters, think about the curves of a girl
Love Me Do
wow...it actually doesn't look to bad a bit more bubbly imo
and my attempt at shadowing...
Zest- Brilliant shit I really like it. Also the same guy from youtube?
Rayz- I am diggin that shit. Makin me not even wanna post my shit.
Scel- Just keep working. Try to add your own style to it. Not just bubble letters.
shruk*n- Looking good man, only thing that sicks out to me is the top of the C, doesn't look right
aekone- Love it man. I like how the lines are connected in a few spots and it's not just plain bubble letters.
aekone: i think there are too many overlapping lines...like for the indents for the e's, m's, etc...it seems to me like you were trying to do it fast, try and do it slower, and take your time
Mes, ur right, the C doesn't look right...
the c still kinda looks a bit off to me, but nothing but a bit of playing around with it should fix that. o and my sharpie was running out so i had to use pen for shadowing...but i prob shouldn't worry about shadowing now
That looks a lot better
yea, then i decided to color it in and shit. it's colored in blue, u can't really tell, with a pink outline
Last edited by Shurik*n; 06-17-2009 at 01:49 PM.
your letters are not uniform, tha bubbling is off in that regard, tha shading is weak, but thats ok cuz erryone is new at this at some point so keep working HARD on it. let OTHERS tell you it looks good (if it does indeed look good) and dont self promote cuz ur gonna look straight silly.
cybe, i like the B and the E but not the C and Y
Shruk*n- Kre1 is right