squint-I really like it except the gap in the middle of the N and the T
feir-Trying cleaning up the F a little.
cybe-If i could choose to do out of the 4, i'd do the 2nd
squint-I really like it except the gap in the middle of the N and the T
feir-Trying cleaning up the F a little.
cybe-If i could choose to do out of the 4, i'd do the 2nd
Originally Posted by Shurik*n
idk...i feel like they all need something..but what?
personally i think you should
think i should what?personally i think you should
edit: the image didn't load up..well it did, but now fast enough so nevermind
kill it with fire!!
i write ZEST 1.
because i get bored at work..
rayz-lookin great, i like the throwie
zest-can use some work, but i like the fill in
crits. gotta new name. SCEL
scel ur shading could use a bit more work...maybe try some on the bottom and less on top (look at stussy's above u). and ur e kinda through me off, thought it was another c.
Thx for tha crits guys,
CYBE: bubble it up, make it pop, think bubble gum
RAYZ: awsome, maybe add something to the Z
SCEL: use a bigger marker (idk why) and keep your letters the same size
If anybody has a tip on how to do an F that would flow with that style, plz tell me.
Love Me Do
..to teh first two, or all of 'em?
the first two, well, its just me, i like nice roound letters, think about the curves of a girl
Love Me Do
nice...simile i guess u could call it.
but yea, i can picture some bubbles in there making it look better, i'll work on that. thx
wow...it actually doesn't look to bad a bit more bubbly imo
and my attempt at shadowing...
Zest- Brilliant shit I really like it. Also the same guy from youtube?
Rayz- I am diggin that shit. Makin me not even wanna post my shit.
Scel- Just keep working. Try to add your own style to it. Not just bubble letters.
shruk*n- Looking good man, only thing that sicks out to me is the top of the C, doesn't look right
aekone- Love it man. I like how the lines are connected in a few spots and it's not just plain bubble letters.
aekone: i think there are too many overlapping lines...like for the indents for the e's, m's, etc...it seems to me like you were trying to do it fast, try and do it slower, and take your time
Mes, ur right, the C doesn't look right...
the c still kinda looks a bit off to me, but nothing but a bit of playing around with it should fix that. o and my sharpie was running out so i had to use pen for shadowing...but i prob shouldn't worry about shadowing now
That looks a lot better
yea, then i decided to color it in and shit. it's colored in blue, u can't really tell, with a pink outline
Last edited by Shurik*n; 06-17-2009 at 01:49 PM.
cybe ... for starters, if you are saying ur work looks cool/is good/is not BAD, etc., be prepared to get RIPPED. cuz bud that is NOT that good. at all.yea, then i decided to color it in and shit...i think it looks pretty cool, agree? it's colored in blue, u can't really tell, with a pink outline
your letters are not uniform, tha bubbling is off in that regard, tha shading is weak, but thats ok cuz erryone is new at this at some point so keep working HARD on it. let OTHERS tell you it looks good (if it does indeed look good) and dont self promote cuz ur gonna look straight silly.
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