walkwiththelion- I agree with crust on the dots. I think you should keep working with it. Eventually youll get a solid throw. Keep working with them E's. You may hate them now but you can get a lot better at them if you keep practicing them. That goes for every letter.
thedudeman-Those handies are lookin pretty nice name.
As for the throws, i think you should use the A on the one to the left. Maybe try an Uppercase N? And make the middle of the M more visible.
Originally Posted by Slushi
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dudeman - your hands and simples are dope, but your throwups are sub-par. the best thing to do i think for a good throw is just fuck around with the letters endlessley until you find something you like.
walkwiththelion - i would like to see that with a clean ass fill on some wall somewhere. that would be ill.
if anyones down for an exchange PM me
Looks pretty dope dude, Im digging that W. Try tweaking the R a bit, just to mess around.
When I get my new scanner we gotta exchange some shit..
for sure. the R is the only thing i mess with lately. cant seem to get the right leg down perfectly.
hardwares thats a dope throw up. i am down for an exchange
ware- clean up that a and e and i think youll be in real good shape.
name- needs lots more practice, itll clean itself up after a while
popn- cute start, reminds me of asian candies
game- the amount of time and effort it looks like it took you to make that, its not a throw and it looks bad
bigblue- always been a fan of your style, keep it up
flert- green one looks solid, lets see it up
couldnt get a pic before the buff got to it =/... simple ass hollow takes 10 seconds
so
Last edited by Wallace; 06-29-2009 at 01:21 AM.
First Off You Know What It Is If You Heard Drake
Making Ho's Wobble Like A Bridge In An Earthquake
been workin on my throws alot so here wat ive come up with...my z needs some work tho...
Wares-luvin it nice and original...would u be able to do a throw in ur style with my word dozer plz???
popn- looking good, nice and clean
wallace - the one above the big black square is the most original and my fav. i can see thats what you were going for on that wall so keep it up.
doze - fix up that curl on the D a bit. and i like the E face. also if you want to do an exchange PM me, just so long as you dont just put up what i give you lol.
Sup guys,im working on a 1 letter S and need help to make it better.
(full throw just for reference)
Here some shity sketches.crits?
What do you guys suggest?
thedudeman-Your letters seemed all mushed together and are a little sloppy.Fix thats and should be better
Doze-Im really feeling the Z but not so much the other letters,Fix the curl in the D and maybe swich the E up
Ware-Sick but make the E closer to the
SO-Shits mint i like the top right one the best
Last edited by ShaolinNy; 06-29-2009 at 05:11 PM.
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the shadow is off and only on the s?
I suggest that you start writin simples yo ur shadow is off like crazy but thats just me lookin at the supposed S y dont you get a bigger pic of ur full throwie
My full throw is great i just need help with a 1 letter S.yeah was just messing around with with the shadow not worried about it yet 1st i wana know what i can make better on the 1 letter s.
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[QUOTE=ShaolinNy;1418035]Sup guys,im working on a 1 letter S and need help to make it better.
Here some shity sketches.crits?
What do you guys suggest?
i sugest you stop writing sneak one, i wrote sneak before you, you pm'd me askin for help with ur style fuck u guyy dont try to pull that shit
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lolollol pwnt
"Theres are plenty of dilapidated out there that need somebody to pray for them i mean you know, on the other hand people are in that position because may be they deserve it or may be because they made the wrong choices...life is a dark fuckin place..and its beautiful in the same token...a lot does grow in the dark" Saber (MSK AWR)
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lmao yes i do recall asking you for help since we wrote the same name back in the day,And i also recall your style sucks and my new style is better than any sneak you ever wrote haha SO GTFO
I got no time for e-fights so take you shit somewere else this is my own style and like i said better than any sneak you wrote
nahh he got "pwnt"
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It's funny cus both of you suck
Last time i checked this was pretty badass and way better than that other fag star and Mr yarbles it seems like your always starting trouble
But yeah u guys keep talking shit behind your little computer screens thinking your tough.Im here for graff not fighting i do my fighting in my Judo classes every week not on the fucking internet.
SO if any one can give crits on my 1 letter S that would be great since i gave them out.Like i said shity sketches but let me know what to fix
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Why dont you two just battle the word.... Oh and shaolin... wasent your letters givin to you?
Crits
Shaolin- the eye in the A is kinda lame and I dont like the way you vut off the right leg of the A.
Critz on mine please.
Last edited by weakfingers; 06-30-2009 at 01:01 AM.
Last time I checked you were incredibally fucking toy.
wow...your hella hxc.
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