Throwies

**ShaolinNy** · 07-21-2009 11:44 PM

Did this in summer school obviously i didnt rly take time one it and did it shiity but in general what do you guys think?

Crits plz

Squint-Not to sound like a dick but im rly not feelinf the throw i saw some of your thows in the past that i though were better

**B.S. POLICE** · 07-21-2009 11:46 PM

yo ima do your s in a min, im drinking right now.

**luster** · 07-21-2009 11:58 PM

new throw im playing with.. lines are really chopy and shit but fuck it.crits?

gezra: like been said lose the add ons , PLEASE!
sneak: the only thing im really not feeling is the A change that up, other then that its pretty good

**LeaksOne** · 07-22-2009 12:47 AM

Originally Posted by faser

all gez does is throwups
wtf

so does JA.....

**CrustOner** · 07-22-2009 01:41 AM

except JA gets up.

**LeaksOne** · 07-22-2009 01:46 AM

Originally Posted by CrustOner

except JA gets up.

well duh but his complaint was that he only does throws. gezr is a joke. but some people dont do pieces.

**JustChillin** · 07-22-2009 02:39 AM

gezra: if your going to post something please try and take your time. Take the time to actually fill in your letters. scribbling across it and then writing to the side "shitty fill in" doesn't automatically make it ok. i still cant make out with the first letter is and like everyone keeps saying the extension on the R doesnt look good.

shaolin:I really like what your doing. I kind of wish you would loose the little hole/gaps in between your letters though. you do it in all your letters except the E. Also if it was me I would get rid of that little money sign cus it looks kind of cheesy.

i hope these were good enough crits :/

**ShaolinNy** · 07-22-2009 11:58 AM

Originally Posted by JustChillin

shaolin:I really like what your doing. I kind of wish you would loose the little hole/gaps in between your letters though. you do it in all your letters except the E. Also if it was me I would get rid of that little money sign cus it looks kind of cheesy.

i hope these were good enough crits :/

Yeah good crits but not sure if i could take away the holes since that how i draw them...ill see how it looks without them though

Originally Posted by B.S. POLICE

yo ima do your s in a min, im drinking right now.

Great thanks!!!

**colz** · 07-22-2009 12:15 PM

gezra-loose all the add ons and try to do the fill in's better
sneak-i like it but loose the money sign and the holes in most the letters
luster-pretty good start, continue playing around with it

another throwie. Crits?

**milk boxx** · 07-22-2009 12:21 PM

Clos- keep all your letters the same size and don't make them get bigger as it goes on.

**CrustOner** · 07-22-2009 12:37 PM

try the word Clops. like cyclops. clos is kinda boring.

**colz** · 07-22-2009 12:38 PM

Originally Posted by milk boxx

Clos- keep all your letters the same size and don't make them get bigger as it goes on.

ya i know what you mean, that happens to me alot

**colz** · 07-22-2009 12:52 PM

took Crust0ner's idea, tryed doing clops, C and L are a little smaller then the O, P, and S. what do you guys think i should do. Crits??

**JustChillin** · 07-22-2009 01:04 PM

i can tell when you go to form a new letter you start from the top and you kind of overlap each word making each letter get bigger and bigger. Start lower. and also your S at the bottom looks disporportioned compared to the top.