Throwies

[SrsBizns]

i lol'd

[Oarsone-FFSC]

lol oars its all gotta be one line to be a oneliner.

yeah i guess. but with 3/4s of the name have holes in theres no way it could all be done one line and look right.

[hardwares]

its totally possible to make it look dope with one line, so make that your goal. otherwise its just not gonna be a oneliner maaaan

[Fetusr]

Adapt and overcome, If I've learned anything useful, thats it. So keep at it.
I changed the F and the S for this one.. I have to say though, I miss my tongue.....

[CrustOner]

define the letters more. get rid of the line in the F, or just make it shorter. fix the T, and draw a hole in the middle of your R. if that's what it is..

[weakfingers]

Fetus man, In my opinion. The F looks like a U, The T is way to pointy and the U should be Level.
This is just my opinion but its looking alot better then last time!

[milk boxx]

squint not really feelin those R's

[Gully Head]

Fetusr-im feeling it yo
weak-the T doesnt really flow,and i cant really tell what the last letter is but overall keep working on it because it starting to come together.

just trying testing this out,not really good at throwies
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[Staz]

just started writing, can anyone give me crits??

[BigBlueViolence]

Squint- Your R as an R = not feelin it
Your R as an A= Fucking nice.
Just sayin'

[Bomb_squad]

hey guys havent been drawning to long
i'd love some help with ideas and what not

[Serpico]

skwint - nice

first oneliner - crits plz?

ware

good one liner work on ure a doh

[Bomb_squad]

heres another
crits holla>>

[weakfingers]

Squint- Your R as an R = not feelin it
Your R as an A= Fucking nice.
Just sayin'

Word, Yeah my R is goofy as fuck. I kinda just winged it when i did the exchange, but yeah thanks for pointing that out for me, I really needed an A.

[Zarb]

I know I said I was gonna stay away but fuck it I cant haha. Been workin on this 2 letter
Squint- I like it man you finally had your N and T go with well eachother
Ware- I cant see the A in it really, maybe stay away from one lines for alittle bit
Sez- Pretty nice start, that Z is straight keep working with it. Make the S the same way as your Z maybe

[Mr yarbles]

Good to see you steppin into your own style
Looks good.

[BigBlueViolence]

Weak E, nice A, weak hand.

Keepin' it simple.

[newbornsek]

[weakfingers]

Fear - Try to make your A uppercase like the rest of the letters.

I felt my throw last page for yarbles my R was to fucked so i tried to redo it...
Sticky kfc fingers = shitty lines

[LeaksOne]

fear change your whole throw. the a is decent but the f is whack the e is whack and the the r is whack.