Kem - try to make your letters taller, their chubby looking.. and try to slim your M down a bit. keep all em the same size.
i think i'm gonna pay more attention to the con part instead of the 2 in my name for now..but just in case..any pointers where I should put the two?
kem: i feel like if u close up the gap in the k just a little bit it would look a little better...
Kem- Your K is alot better this time, maybe make the m alittle less fat
Aeok- The straight letter is pretty good. I dont feel like the throws letters are placed well it doesent't flow well.
zarb-pretty dopee
aeok-i kinda like the green one but try losing the point at the bottom of the E
con-getting better, my opinion is that you should just do con, not con.2
throwie. i have to make my letters the same as the others. crits??
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here's a throw-up i did.
hpir: the K looks solid, but haven't i seen that before? the E looks alright, maybe a little slanted but that can be fixed, i also like that whole concept of the M youre trying to do, but it's really slanted, i would also try widening that semi-circle thing in the middle of the M.
GET YOUR BARS UP.
1st time making stickers crits please!DO you guys think i should cut them out like on the right or leave them on the full sticker??
(Hopefully if i can make the S more cleaner they should look mint)
Zarb-Shits tight wish my stickers were that good
Kem-Fix the K up it dosent seem right
Milkbox-I like it just make the K cleaner and your good
Dank-Not rly sure hard to read,But in the sticker thread those looked good
every one else new to graff thread
Crits????????????
Last edited by ShaolinNy; 08-02-2009 at 02:02 PM.
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here's a darker version on the throw up i did.
ShaolinNY: looks pretty good, one thing i'd suggest is completely taking off the point edge on the upper right side of the S.
Zarb: coming along nice, but the of the E looks weird to me, try making the "chin" of the E a litte bigger and rounder.
GET YOUR BARS UP.
Your other letters don't go with your S too well.. work on that.
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tried to make an S that would fit the rest of the letters.
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GET YOUR BARS UP.
ShaolinNy- I think you should just try out both.. I like the one that isn't ccut out cause to me it stands out more.
I write "NEET"
Gum on shoe I think you should try a more simple S.
I write "NEET"
spore: i'm not really liking the s..try a simpler one like eon1 said.
shaolinny: i agree, use the one that's not cut.
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