Yeah man, not doing it either.
Yeah man, not doing it either.
Looks good, the only thing I don't like is how the E overlaps.Originally Posted by weakfingers
And Leaks, lets stop the back and forth its just clogging up the throwies thread. I didn't want to start beef and I never said I was better than you, shit I've been drawing throwies for like 2 months so I obviously wouldn't over hype myself. I'll still battle you if you want though.
There's my attempt at making amendments and being an adult.
I just went on a roadtrip so here's a few diff things I tried while sitting in a car for 6 hours.
i'm not even gonna bother replying this thread has enough beef as it is
Came i think you should make the middle hump on your "M" smaller.
im still practicing on my throw
i used a fat marker on the outline so it didnt come out well.
Bezar - Your B is weird; take off the extensions on the left. Your E is too long on the bottom. Make both ends of the Z match. Take that extension off the R, and make the leg the same length as the other one. Basically, practice and work on your bars.
Came - I like the fourth the best, work with it.
The forests of Timber have changed.
But the owls are still around.
^^^The only thing i like is your name. Made my night.
There's already a Safe.... He kills it -----> http://www.iloveletters.ca/WALLS/Pho.../SAFEwall2.htm
Im on the verge of changing names. I like SQUINT but its super long and i can change the letters around but on the other hand COEN is super easy to draw but theres not a lot I can do with the letters. Advice anyone?
Oh the that squint throweeeeee is really out of proportion.
[QUOTE=weakfingers;1450510]^^^The only thing i like is your name. Made my night.
There's already a Safe.... He kills it -----> http://www.iloveletters.ca/WALLS/Pho.../SAFEwall2.htm
damn i didnt even know there was another but im not surprised, ive been thinking about changing my name anyway, but i wont since im the only one w. the name in my area, also yeah i just made the throwup recently and i need crits.
I like the coen shit better, weak.
I'd make the N fatter.
If you are gonna do glasses, I'd go all out with a face.
if you sent me an entry for the 'little vagina' handstyle battle or 'cyan' throwie battle, send it to me again because i did a system recovery on my computer and deleted everything. The deadline for both of these battles has been extended until sunday if your still looking to get in
You write on cardboard? Make all your letters the same size
To safe.
Coen - I'm not digging the name that much, but your throwie is alright.
Last edited by Fury; 08-14-2009 at 12:49 AM.
The forests of Timber have changed.
But the owls are still around.
crits yo
the whole point of a throw is to get up quick and big. it's alllll about flow. you lack flow in your letters when put together. you should be able to bust out a hollow like nothin.im still practicing on my throw
i used a fat marker on the outline so it didnt come out well.
if you're thinkin "so what do i change to make it better?", stop right there. fuck with your lines, look how the letters flow together (if at all. if not, pick better letters). don't ask for anyone to exchange with you, i feel it's best to practice "trial and error" cuz it forces you to get familiar with your letters and it'll help progress your own style. what you write is your name, and your name should flow naturally...
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bezar: start with simpler keyboard letters..like actually just copy them, and then tweak out some stuff
thanks everyone for the advice. Is this better?
^ lose the...drop? on ur b.
ok how about this.
Throws ar usually bubbly kinda. Like its hard to do a tech throw when your just starting out. My advice is to keep your shit like the most basic of letters and go from there. Ill post an example in abit.
^^ yes..exactly
Con- Work on your shading. Like try to get it all lined up and stuff. And make sure your outline color is the same color as your shadow. For throws at least.
Bezar- Try to stay away from lower case R's. Just personal experience. Other than that it's just the evolution of your letters.
Crits please? Plen blows had to outline a few times....
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