Srry put it in wrong thread
Srry put it in wrong thread
I write "NEET"
Crits. there will be more to come.
I write "NEET"
i think that says smarf not smart...but anyways, I think I might have to change my name today caz i saw a piece that said cons on a train passing by....but my name is con (no s) so do I have to change my name?Originally Posted by jel0n3uh
the reall con smart
neet- simple looks dec, but loose the dots on the throwie. the shadow is a bit sketchy too
sense - loose the swirls
CRITS.!
Last edited by Eon 1; 08-26-2009 at 05:48 PM.
I write "NEET"
any ideas?
made the s more bubbly, still didnt figure out the damn b
Barks- make you B wider.To me it looks to thin.
I write "NEET"
lol, con dont change your shit for anyone. Unless you were writing cope or saber or something like that. even then, only the other graff kids would care, and chances are they're assholes anyway, fuck em write what you want.
DId you honestly just say that?
First of all who the fuck would name their crew smarf
Second of just
wow
I mean jesus christ.
Oh barks you suck
Peace
i dont see you posting any of your shit
i mean all i see is you talking shit on the internet lol
Barks, just go simple, simple, simple. Learn bars, go to the new to graff thread, etc.
Yarbles knows his shit, so don't bag on him for it. Basically what he's saying is that there's so much wrong with your stuff that he can't hit every point. Just start over and head over to the new to graff thread and go simple.
Neet - Lookin' clean.
The forests of Timber have changed.
But the owls are still around.
its just frustrating cuz ive been writing on and off for about 2 years and and i didnt think i was that bad i mean i knew i sucked but then i got on here and was just disappointed haha
Lol I went through that same thing. Don't worry about it, you'll actually get a lot better because of this forum. That's what happened to me anyway.
The forests of Timber have changed.
But the owls are still around.
quick letter A I did gonna try and continue with the style...
i dont really see the a...well, I get the jist, but its a little too much..chill on the lines and stuff, cause it takes away from the focus points...
Haha arite, Yeah I was just playin around with it trying to go with a knight helmet type of thing.
Going to go back and do one in pencil
Last edited by Bombing With Insurance; 08-26-2009 at 04:02 PM.
you can still go for it, cool idea, just make the letter more prominent than the character aspect.
Not really feelen the pointy things on the C. I do like that you did a good job on ur fill. Now start to add a shadow to it.
the reall con smart
I write "NEET"
CRITS.!
I write "NEET"
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