Throwies

[BigBlueViolence]

Abandoned houses get painted around here, lol

[MARTYRaz]

abandoned is fair fuckin game in my book..

[-Empty-Can-]

Abandoned houses get painted around here, lol

Everything in detroit is abandoned.

Lsd. I don't like the colors on the first one. Don't bomb peoples fences. Work on your throwie, lose the ~ in the s.

Theguywhodrinkstea i don't like that E

[Lsd]

y u bomb ppls fences and shit slunk??how bout i come bomb ur house...i really cant fuckin stand it wen i see some toy ass shit on somebodys fence or a house..that shit costs us money..i guess u wont understand until ur paying ur own bills and have a house of ur own to take care of..i had a house i was renting get bombed on b4 and u have to pay for that shit to get removed..for someone like me paying bills and takin care of a family i didnt get the time or the money to remove it fast enuf and ended up gettin fined for it..so this goes out to all u lil toy fucks bombin ppls homes and personal property..STOP BEING STUPID TOYS and bomb a building or bridge or a big corperation..get some writer morals..

Learn too spell, and im allowed to write on that fence if i want to its a gnar spot right near the school everybody see's it and the fence gets bombed constantly so suck it, and thanks too all who gave crits i shall work on it.

[Firm]

Crits?

I over did the black....

[-Empty-Can-]

THat outline is terrible. You should make your letters closer. Make the line in the R shorter. Lose those things on the inside of the M. The I should be bigger or made uppercase because it doesn't fit like that.

[Firm]

^^thanks for the advice..

[l3monade]

messed up a little u can probbly tell where..
critt please

tones- work on drop shodow, maybe make ur o a little bigger to cover white space under the t

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

this is one with the two comments put into it crits?

knemo- needa fix up the n and e i think u already know that but just saying it again xD

[milk boxx]

knemo- im guessing that K is silent or that would be a weird name... try to slant your N a bit more to match the lines all parallel in it, fix the bottom of that E, try to thin out the M and K a bit.. just keep workin at it and try to clean it up, it looks sloppy

edit: thatguywhodrinkstea - that shit looks mad better then before, clean the S up a bit, looks dankyyy

[-Empty-Can-]

knemo - the shape of the M makes the O look like a D. Maybe space the O out more or change the shape of the M. And your K looks like it says RI. the whole thing looks like RINEMD

[l3monade]

thanks thatguywhodrinkstea, and milk boxx
thatguywhodrinkstea- try to do the the drop shadow on the t like the rest of ur letters

[l3monade]

thanks empty can

[MARTYRaz]

exchange with destroyLA..
crits on it..

[tDot420]

criticism appreciated

[BlacktodaFuture]

^ what the fuck are you doing?

[tDot420]

I dunno, I was bored so I just kinda went too far with it lol, whatcha got stuck up ur ass breh?

[faser]

breh? what...

oh yeh crits... burn it with fire

[I_Like_Monster]

first pic upload so sorry if it goes wrong, and im still quite new to graff so sorry if it sucks lol



I was gonna do some shadow on it but I always fail at it

not good with crits yet but

Firm- take away some of the black outline and move the letters closer and let them flow

bezar - I quite like that man, really like your B

[-Empty-Can-]

^^seriosly? Use one color for now. Make your letters simple and more bubbly. Learn to make shadows and maybe try to find a better name than bar.