Collab in the blackbook with my boy jel...Just waiting on Kem to out his shit in it tomorrow
crits on both of ours?
KidReny- Your stuffs getting alot nicer, maybe showthe whole top of the T
Yarbles- Your better then me, all im gonna say is the left leg of the R seems alittle too fat, thats prob just cause you were goin quick and you were blazed ha
Dank- I like everything except the H, the H is hurting.
Yeah it never used to be like that then I started going too fast and I can never get proportions right unless I go slow as fuck haha
anyway.
That jelone is good if you fixed the n
Also there's a jel tko so I wouldn't start writing Jel
Cash is good just work on making your bottoms and top match up
Originally Posted by the cannabis evangelist
Yeah I told him about that a couple times but he just refuses to change his name haha cause hes been writing it for like 2 years.
Two style of R's new name crits?
Jel shit is fuckin dope as hell
Last edited by KidReny!; 09-11-2009 at 09:38 PM.
I needed somethin new to write anyway short easy and my best letters
crits?
this is why the graff scene is in the sorry ass state its in, little fuckers tryna take the easy way to become a good writer. THERE IS NO EASY WAY. shit takes time and effort, no way around it.
sum N's
i took 4 letters cause im still practicing wen i get better i'll add letters dont sit there callin *****s out when ur new to BS yo, real talk
yo real talk,
post count dont mean shit...
Nevermind
I completely missread that haha
Collab in the blackbook with my boy jel...Just waiting on Kem to out his shit in it tomorrow
crits on both of ours?
KidReny- Your stuffs getting alot nicer, maybe showthe whole top of the T
Yarbles- Your better then me, all im gonna say is the left leg of the R seems alittle too fat, thats prob just cause you were goin quick and you were blazed ha
Dank- I like everything except the H, the H is hurting.
I think its dope, but that toon for the O has got a lot going on for a bomb. Maybe tone that down. Looks ill son. What burough you write?
disclaimer: I do not commit or condone any illegal acts, nor am I affiliated with anyone that does, regardless to anything that I post.
Jel one reps Queens, Im out in LI
jel- good stuff
stre- you need to make them less fat man they look like bubbles..
I was Born Ready Mother Fucker...
melo - needs work.. the M is fucked,the O is fucked, E and L go ok together but make letters the same size
Dank- Your probs gonna win the battle, that shit is looking proper.
Yarbles- I've been feeling the grimy stuff... I like overlapping lines.
Kid reny- It looks simple and clean,
Zarb. I like how you can tell your letters are looser now.The style looks more natural to me now then befor with your older stuff.
The guy who drinks tea-That M as simple as it is kinda reminds me of SUEME'S. Its simple as fuck but yeah, just a suggestion..
I'm trying to stop going super slow and keep all my proportions right and trying to have a more natural, one line per letter' faster style. I know its all super unproportioned but this is what ive come up within an hour.
Weakfingers i think your is so good.
do something like this and try to keep the lines smooth..
Weakfingers- Your shit totally looks more natural, I like it all its good your starting to go faster
Melo- Your older shit a few pages back looks better
hows this for a throw?
@thatguywhodrinkstea: your throw isnt bad try and keep the letters all the same size.. i like the shading and fix up the C
i kinda fucked up the drop shadow
Last edited by smokeandmirrors; 09-11-2009 at 08:09 PM. Reason: to give crits
yeh i know my new shit is weak this is some oldstyle stuff crits on this?
ters- you should try to fit your whole e in
kasp- round ur P and a new k
I was Born Ready Mother Fucker...
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