obvious bite is obvious
obvious bite is obvious
just keep it simple to start with. i dont know about the whole "draw keyboard letters" thing, but if that helps, do it. like benso up above. keep it simple for now, and slowly advance.Originally Posted by iDeemyouSiren
alright thanks
i hate the n.but fuck it.
mero that shit is way better than what you had done to the left of it, but you're right the n is off since it dips so lower than the other letters. i like the d and the e for sure. and nice double hit.
the N looks good but that E dont fit in really
thats tight yo and same as faser
Been messin' with this bubbly 'Trew' throw for a day now. I'm getting stuck at the bottom right corner of the 'W'. The purple arrows point to the trouble spot.
Crits? Solutions to the 'W' problem?
umm anion the first letter is not a T
and that E is failing
try lifting the middle of the W all the way to the top, like the other two bars of the W. and for your bottom right "problem", try replacing the problem area with a big lump rather than that weird loop, or just make that part circular.
GET YOUR BARS UP.
tried something new, i still have some work to do on it, but i like this style a little better.
Peace to Dawzr
word.my N is my weakest letter definitely.its a new name i got time to work on it..this is a practice spot im trying to up my skills before i go for the freights...
k wells heres my first try on my own style crits?
bampity bamp to the new page.tried something new, i still have some work to do on it, but i like this style a little better.
deem - nothing really flows, try to look at some other peoples throw ups and get ideas on how they look. dont bite though.
Peace to Dawzr
Get a bigger picture and I'll try to help you out in Paint, Darkeist.
Bumpy bump.
Dale - Bars.
Snaw - Keep practicing, and work on the N a bit more.
Deen[?] - Work on your keyboard letters and do bars.
The forests of Timber have changed.
But the owls are still around.
Drkst- your S looks better without the bump in it fo sho, but I think the capital E was nice. capital letters in throws separate the wheat from the chaff. B needs a little work, O needs a little work, and make sure your N doesn't look like an H. looks good overall.
why the fuck am i in your sig? i dont believe i was beefin. it was e-sarcasm
and for as much shit as you talk i would expect you to be a hell of alot better. go back to simple letter throws.
Last edited by LeaksOne; 10-07-2009 at 03:22 AM.
Fuck off.
bump for crits
deem, practice basic letters, look up some styles. keep practicing.
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