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    Quote Originally Posted by CrustOner View Post
    Bottom of page bump. You know I give crits when asked for them, and even sometimes when I'm not. This is like layaway crits. haha.
    dude, your shit needs mad work. your hands however are fresh.
    1. on the first one, you FUCKED UP the structure of the R, like big time. don't make the upper left part of the R so wide next time. everything else is IIGHT. i personally hate that style so it'd be hard for me to say shit without sounding negative. oh yeah, and clean up your lines, they got sloppy when you were doing the outline.
    2. on the second pic that R gets shitty towards the ending bar y'know, the \ part of it. it's like you put a pocket of fat in the R at the right middle part of the R you tucked the E behind the R. move the opening on the bottom of the E to the right. The S on this should be like the first pic's S. the I on this one looks awkward, make it like the first I. the T is good.
    3. the hole of the R was placed slightly to the right. align it with the middle part of the R. you left too much dead space on the IST on this one.
    4. show us the toss on top left part of this pic, the R looks really good on that one.

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    The top left picture is basically the same.. haha. But yeah, those were all the first of their kind, they've all been developed on. Thanks for the crits, they were pretty helpful.
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    caesar dont use flickr to post picks use photobucket.com and use the icon to copy paste pics...

    and on the throw make all your letters the same size for now and lose all of the negative space in it for now..on your tag spread it out more so you can read it then get more n more compricatededed

    crust lose the shading for now and work on your letters more they're unproportionate meaning size of letters in general and inconsistent in the width/fatness of each letter

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    All they post is illegals, they have no bombing science credit. They are just illegal eagles who paint illegally. They got it so easy painting whatever wherever they want, try painting legally like the rest of us and you'll find like a bit more challenging

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    that shit's tough bruh.
    is that some dead space i see on the AR? fix that.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MoistGarbageCan View Post
    that shit's tough bruh.
    is that some dead space i see on the AR? fix that.
    where on the AR?
    Quote Originally Posted by kosher Only View Post
    All they post is illegals, they have no bombing science credit. They are just illegal eagles who paint illegally. They got it so easy painting whatever wherever they want, try painting legally like the rest of us and you'll find like a bit more challenging

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    blah blah blah. shit on my chest.
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    ugliness..

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    I love quick grimey fills in black and white. Good work.
    Outta' respect I smash wack toys; put 'em out their misery and send 'em to that upper room. Knock! Knock! Who? Death, mothafucka'! BOOM!

    Before I bang, I go and get high, homey.

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    Quote Originally Posted by devil at sea level View Post
    where on the AR?
    the top of the AR bruh.

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    tips? not just saying im mixing 3 styles
    Last edited by caesar1; 12-16-2009 at 04:19 PM.

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    you're mixing like three styles, man.

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    DAKE, crits please

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    The K looks like a U because the bottom bars are not distinguished. You gotta' get some kind of a line in there to make it more Kish.

    That two piece has potential for a quick repetitive bomb to drop on the streets. Simple, quick, easy.

    Handstyles are illegible.
    Outta' respect I smash wack toys; put 'em out their misery and send 'em to that upper room. Knock! Knock! Who? Death, mothafucka'! BOOM!

    Before I bang, I go and get high, homey.

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    Quote Originally Posted by hpir View Post
    word^^^
    shem-not bad
    sace-not feelin the e

    crits?
    caesar-make yr shit closer together
    daken- go to the new to graff section, if they still have it idk might help

    crits?
    Last edited by hpir; 12-16-2009 at 07:14 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Abor Rudest View Post

    blah blah blah. shit on my chest.
    bump. and kan, your name is totally unoriginal, work on your shadow.
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    new "B" idea

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    Last edited by get a grip!; 08-04-2010 at 10:07 PM.

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    you write richmond dont you?
    and i like that style alot, but clean it up a bit
    i dont condone illegal activity, anything i post on bombingscience is a lie.

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    i don't write anything

    better picture of the new B idea

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    Last edited by get a grip!; 08-04-2010 at 10:07 PM.

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    Crits?


 

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