Throwies

[woonybomber]

NO posing next to it = wonnaB
lol

[joker954]

start simple. u will devlop style, it takes some time

[flask1995]

haven't charged my battery's lately to take pictures of my throwie, instead i made one here:



I should have one by next week but in the mean time, feel free to crit me.

[RES4]

any crits?



fla: thats not bad, dont really like your a but that just me i suppose

[provinT13]

^^ I like the top one, but square off the middle of the S so it flows with the others, and maybe do something with the legs on the R, so it doesn't look so much like an S

[woonybomber]

man your trowies are shit
not you provin the other dude
i think you should not make square letters every toy in the world does a square trowy and i looks dumb juss like every other toys lol

[provinT13]

^^ Don't listen to him, toys gotta start somewhere, and it looks like you got something good goin.

And to woony, the reason toys seem to start out with square and simple throws, is because they are building structure, starting basic, starting simple, it's how toys start, it's how everyone starts

[RES4]

^yea, thanks. im gonna try the thing you said with the s

[City_Flicker]

Not a fan of the exclamation point, but I like it.



Crits? I hate when I start out big and my e is smaller, then my m is smaller then that, and my s is the smallest, and it curves upward, gotta work on that, and yes I know the 2nd outline got messed up.

theres a NEMZ in NYC...

[woonybomber]

thats not true provin i never did a square trow never it never waz apeeling to me i always tryd bubbles and like cartoon trowies =D but i guess thats juss me but if that is were every one els starts then go a head buddy and knock your self out doing square trows lol

[flask1995]

any crits?



fla: thats not bad, dont really like your a but that just me i suppose

thanks, yeah i need to work on A's.

I like yours too but in my opinion you should work from bubble letter's then start working onto letters, otherwise its great, keep doing it

[Con-Artist]

res? its ok....

[Con-Artist]

o yeah, only clean one, ino i cheated with the bottom of the page... but w/e just crit it

[woonybomber]

sombr i like your handy its tight and your trowie is getting better i think you should make a kickoff on the r kinda like the one on the s so it flows a little bit more but other then that its ight i would like to see it on a wall or truck =D

[mindtrix350]

any crits?



fla: thats not bad, dont really like your a but that just me i suppose

A bit too box-like in my opinion and as said, your R looks like a S. Maybe try rounding the letters a bit. Just my thoughts on it, though.

[provinT13]

City- I write nems not nemz

[AteskOne]

thats not true provin i never did a square trow never it never waz apeeling to me i always tryd bubbles and like cartoon trowies =D but i guess thats juss me but if that is were every one els starts then go a head buddy and knock your self out doing square trows lol

yeah but you still suck so what does it matter how you started out. this would be a valid point if you developed a dope style but you havent so stop hating on the kids who are just learning.

res change the left leg of the R. i'd square it off like the other leg and even out the proportions of the two. also change the middle parts of the R and the E. that horizontal line just doesnt look good.

conartist- it looks pretty good just not liking the M. i think having the middle part come all the way down with the legs like that gives the letter a weird tripod look. i would shrink that part down and pull the letter out a little so you can see the left leg. the right leg on the R seems a bit akward too but im not sure what you should do to fix it. lose the vertical lines in the letters too. simple circles would do fine.

edit* pic for talkin..

worked on this a tad bit. crits?

[SEEK NRA]

atesk- work on that style your doing with the M R & N. it looks shacky

[SEEK NRA]

City- I write nems not nemz

yo no beef but, uh same shit.

[major"LEAG"]

Dumb bored... The old name.