Throwies

**Flawless Victory** · 02-12-2010 12:52 PM

I don't see what people are hating on, I think that's a dope D.
Your Ls, however, need work.
I wouldn't bend them up like you've been doing, it makes them look like backwards Js.

**Laimonel** · 02-12-2010 01:21 PM

But backward J is almost an L. Isn't it?

**Flawless Victory** · 02-12-2010 01:23 PM

I'm just not digging it, dude.
It's your throw though, do what you want with it.

**Laimonel** · 02-12-2010 01:26 PM

Tried everything with it, probably a bad name. heh...

**AteskOne** · 02-12-2010 02:30 PM

i find L's to be the most difficult letter to do a throwy for. just my opinion. but i like what you're doing with it. the first one you posted almost looks like a U tho. honestly its a pretty nice throwy. keep working with it and see what you can do.

**SofatOner101** · 02-12-2010 05:57 PM

Originally Posted by Laimonel

Hemis throw is mad O.o Really nice style.
But i cant think of a better D letter : ( Maybe this one's better, what do ya think?:

:S

I'm liking this one way more than the stuff on the walls (which btw, you should be smashing with a piece ay.) I like that "L" however the "D" is going nuts, too much going on for my liking there.

**CrustOner** · 02-12-2010 06:49 PM

That D is dopee.

Just don't do the swirl in my opinion. And I have no advice for L's.. I fucking suck at L's.

**Laimonel** · 02-13-2010 02:46 AM

Hey guys thanks

I really appreciate your comments

And for sofatoner: Im too lame to do a piece, im a bomber haha....:/
Now, im probably gonna go out and try my new throw on the walls. Probably post pics later

Just a one more little question, which D is better, with a straight line, or with a swirl:?

**SofatOner101** · 02-13-2010 04:24 AM

Straight for sure mate....
Well, at least keep that spot on lockdown to practice doing pieces ay..... I wish there were places like that near where Im at ay....

**Shell703** · 02-13-2010 04:35 AM

First post- don't be too hard on the smack down

**Laimonel** · 02-13-2010 04:45 AM

Sofatoner, thanks man, really helped me

And yea, there are a lot spots like that near me cause i live near really old railway so there a lot abandoned buildings ya know

And Shell, you should post a pic of your throw done with marker, cause i cant see anything now

**SofatOner101** · 02-13-2010 04:53 AM

Laimonel - no worries mate...Im still jealous of your abandoned spots but. If I had somewhere like that then I'd be painting it all the time ay.... But yeh...the straight "D" with the "L" that you were doing should look good...try and do one with a fill (ie: a silver fill with black outline)...It should look pretty decent ay...

Shell - That is terrible....I'm not sure but it looks like you're trying to write "HWIS"... If so, then you need to work on your "I" to make it look like an "I", your "S" is larger than the rest of your letters so you should probably fix this, your "H" is boring....no style going on there mate...
your "W" is your strongest letter but even that needs tweaking....

Lemme know what you're writing and I will do you a few throwies for you to look at... Im not claiming to be the best but you defo need a bit of help ay.... get back to me and ill get it done mate....

**Laimonel** · 02-13-2010 05:01 AM

Originally Posted by SofatOner101

Laimonel - no worries mate...Im still jealous of your abandoned spots but. If I had somewhere like that then I'd be painting it all the time ay.... But yeh...the straight "D" with the "L" that you were doing should look good...try and do one with a fill (ie: a silver fill with black outline)...It should look pretty decent ay...

Damn, if i only had some paint

Got just a bit of black left for some outlines. :/

**SofatOner101** · 02-13-2010 05:08 AM

You can always buy paint though...It's a whole lot harder to rack these days than back when Style Wars etc. came out... So don't even trip about that shit ay... But I defo wanna see that throwie with a fill and outline, not just the outline if possible ay mate.

**Laimonel** · 02-13-2010 05:33 AM

Yea, in my town there is like the only place to buy paint and its a small shop so there's no way you can rack cause the cashier can see everything. And i dont have money right now though. But when i get my paint, i promise, ill post the flick here for you

**SofatOner101** · 02-13-2010 05:40 AM

sweet.... If ya ever wanna do an exchange mate, im down....but yeh, i look forward to seeing that throwie...

**CrustOner** · 02-13-2010 09:04 AM

I liked how fat the D was before the straight line. Try a dot, maybe that would look better.

**RemoZ** · 02-13-2010 12:23 PM

Laimonel-Keep that throwy, That shit is nice and simple. It would also look sick as fuck as a rally. The only thing I see that needs fixed is the Exclmation. make the top fatter or lose it and keep the period.