Throwies

[bak]

the purple and pink combination looks better but both are good

the star and the small arrow on the second one would look better with a shadow

[ShaolinNy]

bumpo
smooth- im surprised you're having trouble with the s as that is probably the easiest letter and x's are the complete opposite, anyway you should just try some of the basic ones if trying to find a fancy one isn't working out, eventually you'll get an idea. and on your second one the i reminds me of fube, the t is a little hard to see its a t because the line on the left is quite small. also, the top of all your letters seem to curve aprt from the top of the r, you should try make the r more like the others, otherwise thats nice
veo- its ok for a base but put some sort of whole on the e and o, its not so important on the o but make sure you do it on the e, other than that just keep experimenting
sneak- make sure all your letters are the same size and are in a line, also, dont worry about filling them in for now, what i did was get a big pad i had like a 200 page one and just sit their thinking of ideas, eventually you'll get a good one which you'll develop. its also good when you look back in it abd you're stuck on something and it just gives you inspiration, i've got at least 100 throwie ideas but i only really work on a few and its mainly my current style which im trying to develop
crase?- its a bad angle, go back and get a straight on one if you can, from what i can see it looks ok apart from the a and possibly the r but i cant really see
cos- thats it you're gettin their but the main thing to remember is that you never have a final throwie, it can almost always get better, don't settle on it until you're guaranteed it can be no better and keep experimenting

thx man i hear u i need alot more practice but i did a quick thowies in summer school...What do you think i need to work on?




Crits please

[PROJECT LINK]

looks prety nice for a start just add somthin like color or shde so it brings out the picture...and the a needs some work

[freshair]

no stop...dont listen to wat he just sed^

the A is the best thing u have on that paper
u can do somethin with that style..if anything all ur other letters need help..
...ill try n help yall out if i can...work too much...

LINK...STICK WITH THE FIRST r WHICH EVER i AND THE SECOND t and e...
...not bad man


smooth nuts....wreckd the RITE...r n e are alittle off but still

[smooth_nuts]

polled the battle just need to wait for it to be approved....any one else wanna jum off on a battle while im still bored as shit?
edt*

finally a s i like

[PROJECT LINK]

and...thanks for the crit bro..(fresh) yo -smooth- u did my second copy right...cuz i dont want the first copy in the battle

[smooth_nuts]

yeah the second one man...the second one

[bakerone]

Rite - that throw is fire!!!
Pocs/Pacs - im not sure if it says pacs or pocs, but you should stick with your original throw looks good.

Crits on this please?

bump
only crits i got was hit the books,
any others??

[ShaolinNy]

no stop...dont listen to wat he just sed^

the A is the best thing u have on that paper
u can do somethin with that style..if anything all ur other letters need help..
...ill try n help yall out if i can...work too much...

LINK...STICK WITH THE FIRST r WHICH EVER i AND THE SECOND t and e...
...not bad man


smooth nuts....wreckd the RITE...r n e are alittle off but still

Ok cool man what ya got?Cause i need some help badly

[SLEEP905]

bump
only crits i got was hit the books,
any others??

get a new A, add some 3d and it'll look alot better

[PROJECT LINK]

yo son when they gunna aprove man!!! lol

BAK-ay man ur letters a pretty plain work on em a lil bit

[Eack]

pretty much got ignored the first time it was posted

[PROJECT LINK]

EACK-pretty str8 man i think if u had some diffrent colors shit would be pretty dope

["Riot"]

whitetrash.

[-GEKS-]

eack- not really diggin the overlappin squares thing, but if thats ur steez then just go with it not everyones gonna like it. its nice and clean
just posted in another thread so i will only post one flick.
edit: riot- i dont like it for some reason, idk it seems forced or somethin. maybe just sloppy

crits

["Riot"]

pretty much forced.
i did it in like 2 minutes. so thats prob why.

i like that throw.
little sloppy looks like the can was low.

[freshair]

well here u go...sum simple..

[lolumad?]

pretty much got ignored the first time it was posted

i like it, i think the colors are sick

[freshair]

like the CRASE...just change the R n A .. ..

[smooth_nuts]

polled the battle just need to wait for it to be approved....any one else wanna jum off on a battle while im still bored as shit?
edt*

finally a s i like

bummmmper cars,out for them crits