Throwies

**Anon937** · 06-16-2010 12:38 AM

Originally Posted by GRUMP

My first post here I have been working alone need criticism that will be constructive

Well you must give crits to get crits.
And as for the throwie, you must listen to what sick said and practice. Use bars, maybe even draw circles and then connect the circles until it looks like it reads grump. Everyone has there way of learning, but just practice.

**SiNe-VrL-516** · 06-16-2010 09:35 AM

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any crits on this

**Sbal** · 06-16-2010 09:46 AM

I like the S, but give I a little seperation line for now. The K needs a makeover, and make the tail of the e smaller. And if your gonna do those spikes out of the top on the S, do it on all the letters

**SiNe-VrL-516** · 06-16-2010 09:52 AM

its an N not k and it came out weirdd hah

**SicK-** · 06-16-2010 10:27 AM

Originally Posted by SicK-

Can i get crits? tryn to develop throwie.

Damn probably looks like i am biting that E, Oh well

Bottom of the page bump. cirts please!

**Mr yarbles** · 06-16-2010 11:22 AM

**H1P30N3R** · 06-16-2010 11:59 AM

Originally Posted by Anon937

Meh, I can do better.

middle one looks the best to me...

**H1P30N3R** · 06-16-2010 12:05 PM

rype- you r is starting to come together looking better keep experimenting with it
werm- the m straighten the middle bar.. r needs work and scratch that e
yarbles - i hate you lol shit is fresh

**iPwnF00lz** · 06-16-2010 12:14 PM

Looks good, can't read it but looks good.. does it say evReLER?
paintin tomorrow night, opinions?

if anyone is really down to help a toy I'm having trouble with the negative space in between the R and Y..

**Mr yarbles** · 06-16-2010 12:24 PM

circlek

Y dosn't fit, r is kinda fat.
Just shit you'll get better at with practice really.

**zaco** · 06-16-2010 03:26 PM

rype try making the top part of your letters a little bigger

**kermet_1** · 06-16-2010 03:43 PM

Originally Posted by Mr yarbles

circlek

Y dosn't fit, r is kinda fat.
Just shit you'll get better at with practice really.

Looking good Yarbles, I just don't really like the block things on the C and U.

**kancr** · 06-17-2010 08:57 AM

throw

**Sbal** · 06-17-2010 09:09 AM

Make the upper right extension of th K bigger, the N look more N-like, and make the C do that liitle circle double back thing you got goin on. And fills are good too.

**MASE P_2s** · 06-17-2010 09:14 AM

y would he make the ks extention bigger wen its bigger than all the other extentions

**Sbal** · 06-17-2010 09:17 AM

Because it looks like a shriveled up little penis right now. It needs to be even with the other letters.

**MASE P_2s** · 06-17-2010 09:33 AM

oh my b i was looking at the wrong thing ur rite it does needa b bigger

**YaPp3RoN3R** · 06-17-2010 09:55 AM

Originally Posted by 2FNK?

Hipe:
1.Too much space in the h, and you pinched it too much at the bend.
2. Line width... need I say more?
3. Your i needs work
4. The huge bottom part of your e doesn't look right.
5. Looks like you tried to do shadow on the h, but 3d everywhere else.
6. Straight lines to split curved letters doesn't look good, and they are too long anyways.
7. Letter size, your e is huge.

There's your crits.

damn , thats well said , but u was a little anal twords my g double o g hipeoner