boz i think you mistken what this thread is for. draw your throw, ppl will critt it, based on those critts fix your throw post it again ppl will critt it and so on till ur good enough to know what to do
boz i think you mistken what this thread is for. draw your throw, ppl will critt it, based on those critts fix your throw post it again ppl will critt it and so on till ur good enough to know what to do
I dont write, you dont know me.
eh something new. its really garbage but i practice alot in my garage before i hit the streets
crits?
why not? taken?Originally Posted by Gyse
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^^^ you cant be serious
sezer, thats pretty decent only thing i would say is tweak the Y and change the R. look around for inspiration for the R. i actually had trouble with an R in my current name. as easy as it is i had a hard time making it flow. i got it down though. i would say look in the picture gallery in throws and bombs.
Fuck off.
wasnt my tag, it was a friends anyway.
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word cool , thanks alot leaksone
Seyr, it looks good, but the R needs work.
I like the S, but not the little bubble thing that comes out on the leftside.
Keep practicing!
I'm gonna bump for crits.
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Seyr-Looks good, just don't like the r, I think an uppercase would be easier to work with.
If there is hope, it lies in the writers.
Sbal good stuff mayne im feelin the top one juss do a clean fill and maybe sum lines in the letters on the bottem one but thats me 2cnts
It started out as fun. We had fun. Did many things. Explored all kind of places in the city. We tagged. We bombed.. But most of all we got fame...It was fun while it lasted.But now it all went down the drain. I lost most women i loved. Iy caused deaths to many friends and partners. Just to paint a train -Fuzz
The bottom one is supposed to say SL. I gotta work on my L's i guess.
If there is hope, it lies in the writers.
make the lip a lil longer
It started out as fun. We had fun. Did many things. Explored all kind of places in the city. We tagged. We bombed.. But most of all we got fame...It was fun while it lasted.But now it all went down the drain. I lost most women i loved. Iy caused deaths to many friends and partners. Just to paint a train -Fuzz
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SBAL-first flik, you gotta work on the L. maybe try extending the lower section outward so its in more of an L shape. Second flik, dont bring the upper line in the middle of the S over so far to the left that its almost touching the side.
Smokeitup-The K dosent match your other letters, try rounding it out more rather than having it more detailed like that
Seyr-use a capital R, itll be easier to work with and look better with the rest of your throw
so what ever happened to this idea? I posted right after this...
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crits?
Dkode the lines in the e are weird.
Kane, I like your an, but the bottom of your K seems smushed in.
If there is hope, it lies in the writers.
Here's a crit':
crits?
do something different.
you've been doing the same thing since last year.
I'm all for style, but C'mon.
sbal i like the flow of the orange one but work on the L
It started out as fun. We had fun. Did many things. Explored all kind of places in the city. We tagged. We bombed.. But most of all we got fame...It was fun while it lasted.But now it all went down the drain. I lost most women i loved. Iy caused deaths to many friends and partners. Just to paint a train -Fuzz
its the logo for cityrail:Dkode the lines in the e are weird.
Kane, I like your an, but the bottom of your K seems smushed in.
the train service.
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just some ideas.
kane- ur k does not flow
sbal- ur middle throw is ur best, make your letters less chunkie and fix up your a,
I was Born Ready Mother Fucker...
Neither one of these are amazing, the top is to fat in my opinion. and the bottom one i did in about 30 seconds.
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