everyone sayin kanes K is bad is WRONG! (in my opinion lol)... that K and A are dope, itd make a good 2 letter throw... but the N and E is what im not feelin...
everyone sayin kanes K is bad is WRONG! (in my opinion lol)... that K and A are dope, itd make a good 2 letter throw... but the N and E is what im not feelin...
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Hipe- try to keep the letters the same size
It started out as fun. We had fun. Did many things. Explored all kind of places in the city. We tagged. We bombed.. But most of all we got fame...It was fun while it lasted.But now it all went down the drain. I lost most women i loved. Iy caused deaths to many friends and partners. Just to paint a train -Fuzz
This is my 2nd name in the streets. Just made it.
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Ashis- Make the body and dot of the i a little bigger and you'll be lookin pretty zazzy
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Originally Posted by weakfingers
smokeitup. work on the style a lil bit before you go thrown it up everywhere believe me when your better youll regret ever doing thaT
It started out as fun. We had fun. Did many things. Explored all kind of places in the city. We tagged. We bombed.. But most of all we got fame...It was fun while it lasted.But now it all went down the drain. I lost most women i loved. Iy caused deaths to many friends and partners. Just to paint a train -Fuzz
Those hollows are steezy.
If there is hope, it lies in the writers.
Smoke, your letters fucking suck. Slow down and pay attention to what letters you're trying to create. Your 'D's still look like clowned up 'M's.
I'd be annoyed to have to look at them letters everyday in that city...
The only thing good about them is the 'E' with the face on the end of that hollow throw you did in black. On the white wall, not the brick. But it doesn't fit the flow. It looks like you just copied it from another throw and pasted it on the end.
Outta' respect I smash wack toys; put 'em out their misery and send 'em to that upper room. Knock! Knock! Who? Death, mothafucka'! BOOM!
Before I bang, I go and get high, homey.
And the faces have unnecessarily long lashes that don't fit and flip at the end.
What do you mean the body? And which name ism or ASHiS?
Last edited by ASHiS; 07-19-2010 at 03:57 PM.
whachu write
I dont write, you dont know me.
switch up the u alil bit
It started out as fun. We had fun. Did many things. Explored all kind of places in the city. We tagged. We bombed.. But most of all we got fame...It was fun while it lasted.But now it all went down the drain. I lost most women i loved. Iy caused deaths to many friends and partners. Just to paint a train -Fuzz
the k also looks forced to me .
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the U is weak and looks really weird. i can tell you went slow on the K because the bottom of it is real shaky and its also weak. and this is just personal preference but i hate that pointy shit.
Fuck off.
I was talkin bout ASHiS, the body of the i. the whole letter just needs to be bigger. Also the h looks a bit off, how one side is bubbled and he other is straight on bottom half. Minor details but I think it'll really set it off
Last edited by MakeItTakeIt; 07-19-2010 at 10:17 PM.
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I guess the same could be said about ism though too
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Nothin a name change wont fix unless you go around and brag. In which case, you deserve to get hated on.
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