Throwies

**otter** · 07-25-2010 12:09 PM

dude you have to crit other peoples work before they are going to crit yours.

core: tweak the r and the e

**H1P30N3R** · 07-25-2010 01:11 PM

core- the c is off small at the top super big at the bottom

**Sbal** · 07-25-2010 02:10 PM

I can pretty much guarantee that you are not the second core

**Numaga** · 07-25-2010 07:03 PM

core - the C is too big, tweak the R
PegCity- I'm also interested in seeing how you tweaked it XD

crits? S got cut off :/
I know the top of the U isn't very good

**Havoc97** · 07-26-2010 04:09 PM

CuCCui get the fuck out of here emo

anyways heres a sketch i did about a week ago. please post crits on what you think

**CuCCui** · 07-27-2010 01:16 AM

havoc I see where you are going ,but you seem to lose focus in your exicution...dont put a big circle above your "I" it makes it look girlie...for the throw use a "crack fill" for the shadow,make your letters uniform in size and wieght and for christ's sake put some individual style into it...if you dont want me to cuss and stuff respect me with the same courtesy...
NUMAGA,that's a good start,but watch the edges try and make them crisp and clean,also watch you fill coloring experiment with "crack fills" the help prolong the life of your markers..search the tutorial thread I posted a tute on coloring back in the day when I was MUSASHI its basic but will help with your presentations.

**Havoc97** · 07-27-2010 02:36 AM

Originally Posted by CuCCui

havoc I see where you are going ,but you seem to lose focus in your exicution...dont put a big circle above your "I" it makes it look girlie...for the throw use a "crack fill" for the shadow,make your letters uniform in size and wieght and for christ's sake put some individual style into it...if you dont want me to cuss and stuff respect me with the same courtesy...
NUMAGA,that's a good start,but watch the edges try and make them crisp and clean,also watch you fill coloring experiment with "crack fills" the help prolong the life of your markers..search the tutorial thread I posted a tute on coloring back in the day when I was MUSASHI its basic but will help with your presentations.

any tips on making an individual style? every time I've tried it looks like garbage. I'm not asking for you to do it for me I just want some tips

**ASHiS** · 07-27-2010 12:14 PM

I had to high light with a Sharpie so i couldn't make good clean lines.. My black prisma color is dried out so i gotta rack some more prismas soon! Please crit on the style not the fact that some of the lines are bumpy.

**Sbal** · 07-27-2010 01:15 PM

the fuck is up with the k

**ASHiS** · 07-27-2010 01:22 PM

Originally Posted by Sbal

the fuck is up with the k

Yea i know! i think im going to put the top closer together and delete the little line to the left.

**Numaga** · 07-27-2010 03:09 PM

Originally Posted by Numaga

More crits?

Ashis - tweak the K and S
not feelin that bump on the left of the A

**ThatguywhodrinksTea** · 07-27-2010 03:43 PM

umos- take out the penis in the middle of your m and make your u smaller as well as the little mountain on your s.

**ASHiS** · 07-27-2010 04:44 PM

Originally Posted by LeaksOne

Your shit is terrible

So wait... you say my shit is terrible but i don't see you saying how i should fix it! this forum sucks i hate feeling like im not meeting standards of other ppl! i like it! so im sticking with it! ill get better gradually over time, it takes practice.. so im not getting on anymore.. Ill buy from bombing science but i'm not posting my art just to hear.. "that shit looks terrible".. Fuck that! For me art is independent, If you like the art that you do then it's fine..

**CuCCui** · 07-27-2010 06:38 PM

Originally Posted by Havoc97

any tips on making an individual style? every time I've tried it looks like garbage. I'm not asking for you to do it for me I just want some tips

...heres what you do,take your drawings throw them out the window and replace them with a car,consider what you want to do with that car,consider why you even need a car,upon consideration you may find a bicycle will suffice your needs,for what you do you might need a truck,a motorcycle,or even just a cool pair of sneakers...you have to consider this as well.how much time are you willing to commit to its application,how many colors you want to use....the main thing to consider in "DEVELOPING STYLE" is this function dictates form...Look at race cars for example,they all have to abide by a predetermined set of rules,how they interpret these rules can be shown in aesthetics,performance,and ultimately success or failure... ill do one for you,your word my style I'll post it up in a second.

**CuCCui** · 07-27-2010 07:47 PM

I did this on notebook paper so you have an idea of its size...took ten minutes to develope about 30 seconds to draw the final image you see.the vowels overlap the consonants as they are without extensions.two colors...what a throw is is a piece thrown up real quickly,mostly used for bombing and its utility...how to develope style...the best advice is enter as many battles as you can manage the time for...your work will crown itself in time...look in the old battle threads,my old shit is MUSASHI.I only won one battle out of all the ones I entered but I didnt let that discourage me I was on fire in my mind...and alot of people liked my stuff but there were alot of writers that could burn me upside and down the other...did I care no!!!! I did what I did and I'm glad I did cuz I was getting up...

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**NouveauP** · 07-27-2010 08:17 PM

Thatguy- I'm kinda likin those. Good simple style. The E and N need a little work.
Numaga- GO SIMPLER. Work on clean lines and form before trying to get crazy. Take it slow.
Ashis- same advice
Havoc- Clean it up. It has potential.

My funk.

**Flawless Victory** · 07-27-2010 08:25 PM

Your hands GREATLY outweigh your throws man, that needs a lot of work. pretty much every letter.

that little bouncy ball on the back of the A ruins it.
The E doesn't need a lower lip, or a jawline, just one line.
same with the P, no need to fold it in.

the holes are really cheesy looking too, just a line of a dot or a hole that follows the shape of the letter would be fine.

**H1P30N3R** · 07-27-2010 10:04 PM

lol^... guywhodrinkstea is that begen ? Anyway the second e on the second throw resembles an f too much fix that and your letters do the same as mine start one size and with each letter get larger so idk i'm working on that too. Are you left handed by any chance?