Throwies

[-Dank-DK-]

some new name im workin on and the tags to

[bekone1]

dope^^^

[bekone1]

No, you said you dropped the K because it doesn't matter in a throw up. I was just clarifying that you'll have to learn that K sometime, so you shouldn't leave it out. It's just a good habit to have. At least try one. You can change it later.

As for Bek's piece- (with the smurf) It looks like you were working with bars, which is crucial to constructing a piece. And you seem to have a decent understanding of the letter forms. There's not a lot of balance in your piece, and it looks like you threw in add ons to make up for that. You should lay off of extension until you can design letters and know when you need them. You're throwing on bells and whistles when you don't have a quality product to begin with (sales metaphors? gay). Also, your can control and color choice shows that you're not ready to take on a piece like that. Take it slow, homie. You got that basics, but don't get ahead of yourself.

thanks man ill draw something up let me know what u think when i post it

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

risk- just dont go toooo crazy with size it gets bigger from as the name goes on
eros- kill that style not feeling the points

task- keep the k, on your green throw drop 1 line on the a and work with it...

[LIGRAFF]

Quick 2 letter; NUCE

[Seez Me!]

pretty ill. i wanna see the whole thing.

[-Dank-DK-]

some new name im workin on and the tags to

fuck just wanted to repost

[REMS F.U.]

crits on the REMS one plz the Mario one was fckn around.

[PREA672]

thats not an M

[Flawless Victory]

looks like Aans.

[Tokyo_ROCKABILY-CLub]

make dem letters more legible.

[V3da]

[Stigma02]

make it cleaner and fix the letters especially the R

[bekone1]

^^ i couldnt tell that was a R make the letters flow better also

[Willis1989]

Crits pls

[Zookyook]

krutch thats just an outlined tag, throwups are filled in letters, do the outline fast and fill that shit in fast, use bubble letters and easy stuff to start

dank those throws are real nice, i like the K a lot, the R and I need work, theyre too smashed and short

[krutch]

krutch thats just an outlined tag, throwups are filled in letters, do the outline fast and fill that shit in fast, use bubble letters and easy stuff to start

dank those throws are real nice, i like the K a lot, the R and I need work, theyre too smashed and short

Yeah, stupid me, I had too many tabs open in the browser. Should have been posted in THIS thread

[V3da]

Hey thanks guys for all the crits, I'm gonna keep just throwing all my shit up here.

[V3da]

oh and REMS I like your name idk about flow wise, but REM as in the sleep is fucking sweet man.

[HORSEthefan]

Arzo, i think you should try to make all your letters the same size, and even on the bottom.

Willis1989/Wise, i like your throw, but the "w" seems off to me. maybe try some different styles.

Rems, not gonna lie the mario throwie is way doper than the second one. id go out and paint that one just for shits and giggles, cause its pretty original(sp?)

couple of less than sober sketches from the last few days.