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    quick throw with a new name...
    crits, pwetty please

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    i like it
    It started out as fun. We had fun. Did many things. Explored all kind of places in the city. We tagged. We bombed.. But most of all we got fame...It was fun while it lasted.But now it all went down the drain. I lost most women i loved. Iy caused deaths to many friends and partners. Just to paint a train -Fuzz

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    Is your second letter a u Illogic? the M is too big, if you could see the down bar on that second letter it would look like a u (i'm just going with that its a U)



    MAKE, I dig it, maybe make the space in the bottom of the A a bit smaller like it is in the K.

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    wyzrd I think #2 is the ansr to ur problems with the y and d. peace.
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    more choices



    Some crits

    Ligraff (NUCE?) - Your N looks kinda like a K, make the middle line a little higher and it will be more N like (not sure if its supposed to be lower or upper case, but the rest of it is upper case), not even gonna comment on the U, the top of the C looks good, but the bottom is boring. Make your E less rounded at the top and add in the spiky bits that all your other letters have.

    Willis (WISE) - I hate the letter W too, your stuff with the wings looks like i was doing, i've got a lot of flak for doing those W's, and they end up really unequal alot when i put them on the wall. Just switched how i do mine. You are mixing upper and lower case letters, try a lower case e or upper case I. Maybe try bending the very top of your S up to the sky.

    Sick (WERM) - You are mixing upper and lower case too, it makes the R look like a C. Add some space in between the outside bars on your W. The top middle line on your M doesnt come down into the middle of the middle bar, make sure it goes in the middle.



    Meant to put this up with the first wave, forgot to though. A good example of a lame W, my middle bar should be almost twice as big, the bottom middle line should go up further or the two top lines should come down further. The middle bar on my Z isnt even, it starts bulging out. The r is almost going down too far (if it goes too far it looks like an n, there are several on walls that look like ns around my town). The bar on my D is all whacked out.. I wasnt tall enough. I should have started the whole thing down lower on the truck so that i could do the d better

    Maybe someone will learn from me critting myself, who knows
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    wyzrd, i think all these uppercase ones are better than the lower case ones u bombed, especially the d, that long bar of the lowercase D really killed ur throw for me. maybe try and uppercase y and D if you like those others still. the sketches are better tho for sure. good work, keep drawing.
    "True merit, like a river, the deeper it is, the less noise it makes." ~Edward Frederick Halifax

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    Quote Originally Posted by soath View Post
    wyzrd, i think all these uppercase ones are better than the lower case ones u bombed, especially the d, that long bar of the lowercase D really killed ur throw for me. maybe try and uppercase y and D if you like those others still. the sketches are better tho for sure. good work, keep drawing.
    Yeah i think i'm gonna switch to uppercase, everything except the y. Probably gonna do the y lowercase style where it bends to the left cause I cant get any style into a capital Y and at least the lower case isnt as boring. All these changes courtesy of psilocybin.

    Werm you should write STEAK instead. I've never seen anyone write steak and that could be funny. You can make your Ts out of T-bones

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    ^uhhhhhh lol
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    let me burst your bubble on that steak comment, STEAK ORA KREW

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    Wyzrd, sometimes your lower case R comes out as a K, but I like your sketch number 6, I think the little leg on the Z looks good and the R and D are better.

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    Wyzrd, i saw ur little pencil comment that it looks silly without the Y but it's the same word AND it looks fine... w-z-r-d VS. wyzrd the Y makes it read sorta Why?zard... my idea id dunno, the Y is cool to but i don't think the four letter version is any sillier(spelling?). peace.



    *not my actual throw. sucks i know.
    Last edited by soath; 08-12-2010 at 07:29 AM. Reason: flick
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    I dig what Soath is saying wzrd looks better than wyzrd if you ask me, also the Y seems like the letter you seem to struggle finding a place for more than the rest, just my opinon tho.

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    otter, not many crits really. except the same thing I told u in the chat room, have ur hand flow faster and more fluid-ly (?) ur hand must be light and fast. so it'll have that nice flow that makes any ugly letter look good (well not always though)

    and is that a ginger kid I see behind the paper? haha

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    Cirts on this one pls, think im gonna keep it this way for now unless its really wrong.


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    Soath the S in your name should be done like the KWS, but make the top and bottom blocky so that it flows with your other letters but keep the some curvature in the middle. I think you just need to get rid of the wierd triangle bump. Your other O and A are even, my favorite is the A. The bottom space on the H and the right bar on the T are not even. Its not that bad, fix those two things and i'd say you should bomb it. (but you know how i feel about bombing)

    WZRD!

    I guess it does look alright like that.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Willis1989 View Post
    changed the w again

    This man wants some crits so i'll bump him.

    Like i said before, you are mixing upper and lower case. Your E has a whole lot of blank space in the bottom bar. You should add a curve or a spiky bit or something to the bottom of it to make it look less boring. Adding spiky bits to your other letters would make the middle of the w look less out of place.
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    Quote Originally Posted by PermanentMarkers View Post
    Soath the S in your name should be done like the KWS, but make the top and bottom blocky so that it flows with your other letters but keep the some curvature in the middle. I think you just need to get rid of the wierd triangle bump. Your other O and A are even, my favorite is the A. The bottom space on the H and the right bar on the T are not even. Its not that bad, fix those two things and i'd say you should bomb it. (but you know how i feel about bombing)

    WZRD!

    I guess it does look alright like that.
    that is not my throw... haha, although i was trying to come up with one there.

    wizardds crew is huge and to legit for you to rock that name for to long, like in the distant future... no diss. i think wzrd makes more sense as a word. peace.
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    my throw

    kinda fucked up

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    keep this pic staone, one day youll look back an laugh so hard you might die.

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    lol im already laughing at it


 

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