Throwies

[MakeItTakeIt]

Thanks, I've been havin trouble with the t, but I'm workin on it.

Is that deah or dean?

Whatever it says, make the first letter bigger and maybe try to lose the sharp corners like on the a and the d. It'd make your letters more uniform. Also put your holes in a different spot, that's just awkward. I like the style though, that e is pretty sweet lookin.

[Numaga]

Thanks, I've been havin trouble with the t, but I'm workin on it.

Is that deah or dean?

Whatever it says, make the first letter bigger and maybe try to lose the sharp corners like on the a and the d. It'd make your letters more uniform. Also put your holes in a different spot, that's just awkward. I like the style though, that e is pretty sweet lookin.

XD it actually says neam

so sorta like this?

[MakeItTakeIt]

Yeah, I can see where you're goin with it, but it just doesn't really look like an n. And the m would look more like an m if you extended that middle line to the left too and not just the right.

[DEOS96]

Yeah... nice style and flow but I'd work on the N... You shouldn't totally change since it has a style but work on it buddy

[NouveauP]

Nean(?)- Work on letter structure, this isn't looking too good.
Note- start simpler

[Phillip McDougall]

Dope. Paint it.

[MakeItTakeIt]

XD it actually says neam

so sorta like this?

Yeah that works, flows better too. The n still looks like a d though

Also, you're having the same problem I used to have, your letters get progressively bigger. work on getting them all the same size.

Thanks nouv, its a constant work in progress.

[NouveauP]

I tried my throw tonight.

[IbuprofenTablets]

I thought you wrote Jaep?
Looks like Jaet.
The flash from your camera also doesn't allow me to see all of the lines in your throw(although the ones that I see look clean).

[ChadWarden]

if you're going to flick a freshly paint train at night, try and take the pic from an angle to reduce the glare from the flash. Works for me anyways.

[NouveauP]

Yeah, I was having camera troubles out there and only took one picture (and sadly, didn't look at it before leaving the yard) but this throw wasn't structured exactly like I want it. The E (which, of course, you can't see) was my strongest letter in my opinion, and yeah, my P definitely the worst. But I'll post another up soon and see what you guys think. Thanks for the crits.

[ASHiS]

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New name again.... tell me what you think.. This is a new style for me so ill work at it!

[IbuprofenTablets]

[Numaga]

Changed the N on throw
and i know the second E on the straight letter is off.

Ibu - that R is sick.
ashis - looks okay, work on making everything the same size and whatnot

[Flawless Victory]

silver and gold is a horrible color combo.

[Numaga]

silver and gold is a horrible color combo.

i know, it's the last 2 markers i had though. that's why i used colored pencils for the other one

[KESKone]

[ChadWarden]

keep an eye on the size of your letters. notice how the get progressively larger? not saying you can't go for that sorta style but I'd wait until you're a bit better.

the bottom to bumps of the e look like a ballsack if you tilt you head to the left; try and a tighter curve and keep em together. also, your s kicks way out and either cramps the bottom of the k or forces you to push it out further. S don't look to bad though. Sorta decent hands for someone like yourself ,too.

keep at it.

[KESKone]

thanks for the crits i was trying to do a small to big throwie but ahh it came out kinda shitty

[KidReny!]

Whats up with all these *****s writting one at the bottom of there tags now days?