Eh you're a nice guy so I'll help you out.
Lose the arrows.
Make all your letters the same size some are fat some are small you can get away with a little bit of proportion slops but it's really legible in this
Your middle letters are still letters so repsect them.
Also don't use the bottom of your paper I know it's easier but it dosn't get you very far.
Your style is going to look shitty just give it time and it'll get good.
Also if you don't have a good handstyle start working on it
I didn't get throws until I got I got a handle on my handles.
Same goes for piecing.