Throwies

**Zookyook** · 10-31-2010 01:06 AM

hip hop is a culture not a genre of music....

void and hipe, the faster u do throws the cleaner theyll look.... it looks like u guys move the marker really slow and without much flow... ull get style once u practice that over and over.... and over

**Vøid** · 10-31-2010 03:13 AM

Alright thanks. I'll post another when i think its better.

**GnarR** · 10-31-2010 06:31 AM

H1P3, i like the style you're using but the "i" looks out of place, try to make it blend in with the other letters. it just kinda stands out. I like the two on the top

**x2050** · 10-31-2010 11:47 AM

Done using the last of the finest dollar general paint...

**H1P30N3R** · 10-31-2010 11:50 AM

stick to pen and paper .. the paint doesn't explain the wack letters.

**Vøid** · 10-31-2010 08:02 PM

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Any better Zook? if not any crits?

**H1P30N3R** · 10-31-2010 09:08 PM

toy throw battle

**Zookyook** · 10-31-2010 10:31 PM

tone down that handstyle void, its got too much goin on, tags look better simple and clean... and just do what u did to that page to like, a whole notebook or 2 or 10 hah, its all about practice, to crit those id say make the I thinner than the O, and change the V a bit, like lose the bump on the top left, the one on the right will work, for now dont be ashamed to go bite some real writers, then when u can do somethin that looks good, change it around so its ur own style

**Vøid** · 10-31-2010 10:49 PM

Originally Posted by Zookyook

tone down that handstyle void, its got too much goin on, tags look better simple and clean... and just do what u did to that page to like, a whole notebook or 2 or 10 hah, its all about practice, to crit those id say make the I thinner than the O, and change the V a bit, like lose the bump on the top left, the one on the right will work, for now dont be ashamed to go bite some real writers, then when u can do somethin that looks good, change it around so its ur own style

Thanks Zook. Nice crits there. Any legends out there that have V in it?

**Zookyook** · 10-31-2010 11:09 PM

revok, sever, savior, solve, vizie, thats all i got right now... check the artist list on the freights link on here... ill make it easy for u...

throwie for talkin out me arse...

**GnarR** · 11-01-2010 11:49 AM

Zook i really like the way you write your letters, that kinda the style im working towards, all smushed up and round. right now im just doing bars and really simple shit, how long did it take you to develop that style?

EDIT:
ive been doing this bullshit for 3 hours, what now!?

**ReSeM** · 11-01-2010 04:09 PM

zook paint that shit

gnarr work on your bars they are all over the place

**dubbed** · 11-01-2010 04:16 PM

zook thats a mean throw, fukn sick

**GnarR** · 11-01-2010 04:42 PM

as in make them even? what specifically? which letters in general suck the most?

**EXI** · 11-01-2010 04:47 PM

gnar your bars arent the same width etc, your O in record is bigger than your c, r, etc. the top of the I's are too small to fit your letters, do this. draw out the letter. example. you draw 4 bars for E, 3 for I 3 for A etc.

**Phat 2** · 11-01-2010 05:55 PM

**GnarR** · 11-01-2010 06:06 PM

thanks for the crits EXI, ill keep working on em and ill post my results

**EXI** · 11-01-2010 06:09 PM

Originally Posted by GnarR

thanks for the crits EXI, ill keep working on em and ill post my results

sure. and post it in blackbook section instead of of this, this is strictly for throw ups

**NosE2** · 11-01-2010 09:49 PM

yo phat im diggin those 2 letter throws, pretty fuckin clean, i just dont like that tumor thing on the main bar in your p where the sdf is. and i would post this shit in the characters thread but i will get burned so hard, i just started to try characters today for the first time out of 3 years of graff =////