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    havent been on in a few days... thanks for the crits hopefully these are an improvement...
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    i dont agree with that M

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    word... just trying some new shit

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    Quote Originally Posted by HugzForThugz View Post
    Bump for crits. Click Attachment

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    I agree with it

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    does-nice slaps
    soar-not feelin your a try it lowercase
    mone- think the m is good if you try something different with the left side of it
    mesk- not feelin the m but you do have a good idea going with the letters coming to a point at the top.. the second 1 your e looks more like an a to me also.


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    Quote Originally Posted by RustySpoon View Post
    You're not really about to write Does, are you?

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    crits? advice? anything? lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phillip McDougall View Post
    You're not really about to write Does, are you?
    Was going to until I realized it was taken. :/

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    Revised a bit messy, 's' is also a little thick. More crit?

    does-not feelin the bottom bubble on the 'd' or the little rectangle you have on the upper right of the 's'. Also too scrunched feeling for me.
    soar- I agree with whoever above, try a lower case 'a' for grins. Maybe try adding a visilble leg for the 'A'?
    mone- I like, left leg of the 'm' doesnt flow though. Also something looks to me funky about the right leg of the 'n'. Likin the 'e'.
    hipe- 'pe' looks nice, 'hi' not as much. Try finding another why to depict the horizontal bar in the 'h'. The 'i' is just too boring but I can see how it'd be hard to get that to flow well.
    anonymous - try rounding the bottom point of the 'd'? Looks fine as is though, consider doing more letters? And just missed a shadow on left side of the second 'd'.

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    i think its improved from the last style, crits and advice?

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    the d in you previous post was more original, and r is just too big and looks akward. make them the same size or closer to it.

    the second throw in your above post is better.

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    DR, those green ones are heaps better than the B&W one.

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    Hipe i'm likin the letters a ton more, the 'i' in the painted throw is the best 'i' i've seen from you imo. Work on your 3d/drop shadow though and stay consistent with it, some of those have a combination and it looks weird, and some of the 3d is off in places.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Flawless Victory View Post
    DR, those green ones are heaps better than the B&W one.
    wow i must be style blind haha.. i asked a few friends aswell they all said them.. i really liked that black and white one haha ah well..

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    yea i've been tryin to make my letters more legit focusing on that rather than my 3d

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    obviously still need a shit ton of work but am i gettin off to the right foot at least? workin on writin it quick n smoothly.
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    ^ lines are clean, but theres no style except for your s, just looks like blobs shaped into letters

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