crits? advice? anything? lol
crits? advice? anything? lol
Was going to until I realized it was taken. :/Originally Posted by Phillip McDougall
Revised a bit messy, 's' is also a little thick. More crit?
does-not feelin the bottom bubble on the 'd' or the little rectangle you have on the upper right of the 's'. Also too scrunched feeling for me.
soar- I agree with whoever above, try a lower case 'a' for grins. Maybe try adding a visilble leg for the 'A'?
mone- I like, left leg of the 'm' doesnt flow though. Also something looks to me funky about the right leg of the 'n'. Likin the 'e'.
hipe- 'pe' looks nice, 'hi' not as much. Try finding another why to depict the horizontal bar in the 'h'. The 'i' is just too boring but I can see how it'd be hard to get that to flow well.
anonymous - try rounding the bottom point of the 'd'? Looks fine as is though, consider doing more letters? And just missed a shadow on left side of the second 'd'.
i think its improved from the last style, crits and advice?
the d in you previous post was more original, and r is just too big and looks akward. make them the same size or closer to it.
the second throw in your above post is better.
DR, those green ones are heaps better than the B&W one.
Hipe i'm likin the letters a ton more, the 'i' in the painted throw is the best 'i' i've seen from you imo. Work on your 3d/drop shadow though and stay consistent with it, some of those have a combination and it looks weird, and some of the 3d is off in places.
wow i must be style blind haha.. i asked a few friends aswell they all said them.. i really liked that black and white one haha ah well..
yea i've been tryin to make my letters more legit focusing on that rather than my 3d
obviously still need a shit ton of work but am i gettin off to the right foot at least? workin on writin it quick n smoothly.
^ lines are clean, but theres no style except for your s, just looks like blobs shaped into letters
ribcage - nice structure
slip - first one is dope. wouldnt mind seeing the S tweaked a bit tho
^cant read it very, well throw or tag
You like that "h" don't you
re up for crits ..
mogan im tryin to tweak your h into my own guess im bitin for now its ok im a toy lol
^make the left most bar of your h straight and longer, and that will make it look like a good h instead of a shitty n
true i see that thanks ribcage
That looks like a chill spot, you should try and take your time and do a clean, solid fill-in. Would make it look a lot nicer. Just a suggestion
o yup
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