Throwies

[MakeHate]

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[ironcrack]

needs more aeroes. duh

[Flawless Victory]

needs more eggrolls.

[ironcrack]

eggrolls is what i meant to say. yur rite

[SicK-]

Hate, that would be good if the shadow wasnt so fucked up

[MoganOne]

Hate that looks good

[Drone6]

So crits?

[MoganOne]

Looks like it says eeik... Don't do that bump on the right side of the first E is does not need it... the squared edge on the i does not go with the rounded style. props for having the same letter sizing through out the toss. keep at it my dude

[nerd+_+]

worried that the D looks like an O... Gonna have to work on that and a a lot more.

[weedeater]

yeah, looks like nero. and that N is way bigger than the other letters.

[MoganOne]

nerd that is horrible... slow down man

[nerd+_+]

Thanks Weedeater and MoganOne. I totally agree. I need to take a step back.

[Drone6]

Thanks ya it says epic but i'll deff ditch the squared edge and make the p bigger, all while keeping the size the same .

[BALE]

First one a one liner for a name im messing with "Debs' second one throwie for my name.

[CHOWDER 36]

dude your first throw looks like it says "jels". the secong one, ur a doesnt look like anything, also dont forget to add the slitts on your letters with openings, like ur b's

[Flawless Victory]

One liners are lame anyways, yo.

[CHOWDER 36]

no, i disagree, if u can pull off a one liner throw...thats ill...mad props too you.

[SicK-]

Crits on this please
I know shadows fucked up. it happens.

[Norfsuthr]

Bale, if you go with debs you should make the D into a capital. It would just take some tweaking and it would look a lot better. The a in your bale is bad, those loops at the tops of your letters look bad.

I like your sketched shell nerd lol.



edit: We- the w looks good. make the bottom parts more equal and better circles, and make the lines come down into the w more. Also make the 2 extensions on the left and right bars of the W the same size. For the middle part of the e where you have that smile thing you should just do a straight line in, then a circle out.

[BALE]

Bale, if you go with debs you should make the D into a capital. It would just take some tweaking and it would look a lot better. The a in your bale is bad, those loops at the tops of your letters look bad.

I like your sketched shell nerd lol.



edit: We- the w looks good. make the bottom parts more equal and better circles, and make the lines come down into the w more. Also make the 2 extensions on the left and right bars of the W the same size. For the middle part of the e where you have that smile thing you should just do a straight line in, then a circle out.

Thanks. I feel whatcha sayin.