3d is waaaay off.
It should have stayed there... Ok thats a little harsh, my bad.
Your letters are bad, not only structure bad, design bad.
The K looks like a bad H, the E's are just boxs, and the N at the end looks more like a K then your K.
Your fill looks crisscrossed, do all vertical or all horizontal line fills.
The 3D is atrociously bad.
Hit the books my friend. Work out a new toss, post it up for critz, fix it and repeat for awhile then try it again. Sorry if thats a little harsh but I'm not going to sweeten it up, you need straight forward advice.
Capo, that paint looks pretty nice, I wouldn't use it on some practice throws. If I was you I'd draw a whole lot until you got that shit fuckin perfected, then just hit the fuckin streets with that shit. I ain't saying your painted throw is bad, but it ain't good. It's just normal old bubble letters really. No style. So, develop a lil bit of style, then start painting. That's my lil piece of advice.
she told me
"u spend your free time on the weekends out, and when u get home from work your on that thing. so this might make it more enjoyable"
she broke out soon after that saying i dont spend enuff time with her.
good riddence to bad rubbish.
Last edited by Fube; 04-15-2008 at 08:12 PM.
EDIT: Got bored and decided to give you a little example I guess. Don't get me wrong, I'm just a toy too, so don't expect anything too great.
This is just my first time writin that name, you've been writin way longer, so you should be able to do something even better
Last edited by PabloESKObar; 04-15-2008 at 08:53 PM.
My bad Keek, sorry if that was a bit heavy handed. I'm not usually like that.
Pablo, I do like what you did with my name, the A is pretty cool, but here what about something like this..
Yeah that's better, I don't think you need that lil thing hangin down off the bottom of the A though, but it's definitely better than them throws you painted in my opinion.
ForGiven - dope but i think that would be more n the bbook shit.
Capo Izi - looks a shit load better.
rowdysk4nker - nice throws
fucked up a little but i could be worse
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Thanks, heres a new one...which yeah I stole your A you made on mine before Esko, don't kill me, It just flowed well with it....anyway here..
Aha, it's straight. Go head and steal every letter if ya want. That's why I drew that up for ya, so you can use them letters and add on to em.