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Word, glad you understand
hahahaha oh man. can we just drop this?
yo rewt someone on 12oz writes rewt, go get him
Hahaha, I'm just messing with the kid. You gotta' admit though, it was lookin' pretty similar. You guys take this shit so seriously, it baffles me at times.
tried something different, crits?
don't make whatever that first letter is a face, that never turns out as cool as you think it will.
Il keep that in mind
(PROPS TO RIBCAGE ON THIS LAST ONE)
Crits?
Shiver I feel that, not sure about the fills but loving the style,
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As always, crit harsh and to the point.
well in my opinion the "S" doesnt fit with what you have going on, id develop something that flows better, less is more (sometimes). also your drop shadow is off on the ends theres tuts all around here telling you how to do it correctly. also i hate your "A", "C" is dope tho..with that being said its not 100% horrible. PRACTICE, PRACTICE, PRACTICE!!! hope this helps in some way. keep your head up homie.
Bro that crit means a lot, I wasn't really expecting one, I write all day every day and fill book after book and I don't see myself improving that much but I guess I am...Originally Posted by spek.
I am shit with my shadow, most of my letters but like you said bro, chin up.
Anything you want critted?
peace
nah dont sweat it fool just keep writing, shit will evolve. just go get you a few notebooks and start filling them. also, your on the internet utilize it look at the greats (cope2, seen. ces, zephyr, skuf, etc etc etc) DONT BITE, take in everything they do and they styles and let that motivate you to better yourself. but before you get shit twisted im prolly the last person on here u want to take advice from just letting you know shit thats helped me move past the stage your at. stick with it you have potential
Thanks bro you've been a help big help, probs
if you need anything critted by a toy, you know im your boy
got some shit in the toy simps thread if you wanna crit it..its straight either way tho
When I'm not writing or looking at some shit online i def will, take it easy son
bump, any crits?
Reminds me of my old old old throws. Fix your R, use the last E.
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