lado
Lose the force field on the second and fix the R, it's not nice at all and doesn't work. IMO.
The shadow looks decent on the last throw too.
for what its worth, I'm a toy but I hope you still appreciate the crit
lado
Lose the force field on the second and fix the R, it's not nice at all and doesn't work. IMO.
The shadow looks decent on the last throw too.
for what its worth, I'm a toy but I hope you still appreciate the crit
I appreciate all crits. And it says SEA, not SER :S
Hipe I don't understand why you switched your name? and I do not understand why your stuff is still coming out wack... I've seen you post a lot better Hipe throwie weeks ago
Oh true, in that case lose the little cross at the top of the line, really looks like an R son.Originally Posted by Lado
yeah i was looking for a change and recently found out that a local guy has been writing hype for years .... I have simple bubble letter throws im working on, maybe I will progress one day
I don't like how blocky your new stuff i looking
And why are you so obsessed with throwies? Why don't you draw some fuckin' straight letters, then work on a solid throw
dont have much direction thought that throws was where to start but yeah ill try some straights
Alright cool dude, thanks
yeah...
Phat thats nice, theres just a little to much going on
Hey, Ive been workin on a 2Lips throw but I just cant get it down cuz of the negative space the 2 and L create. I usually write it as 2LiPS. I dont have a camera atm but Ill get up pics when I can, any tips?
Tighten up your letters so as to reduce negative space, I dont see how a bubble 2L could leave that much space though.
^ watch them drips homie
it was a gloss can, I think thats why..
Page bump dayum you got up pretty high on that car
wooden stepladder found near the tracks came in handy. gloss sucks right? and is this page just for drawn shit? whatever.
Decent, original, ugly S, hideous handstyle.
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