Quit trying to make all of the letters look the same.
They look different on purpose, they aren't the same letter.
Work more on making your throw work as a whole, not individual uniformity.
Quit trying to make all of the letters look the same.
They look different on purpose, they aren't the same letter.
Work more on making your throw work as a whole, not individual uniformity.
Kibby: The one in the first picture with the drips is the best is the only thing I can say
Hydro: That is absolutely horrible. Almost as bad as my shit when I first started. First of all, that's not even a throwie, it's more of a shitty piece. Go to flickr, and look at pictures of throwies. HUNDREDS AND HUNDREDS of pictures. For crits though: GO SIMPLE! Your bars are TOTALLY horrible, your lines curve in and out everywhere. Make all of your letters the same size and angle. Make all of your lines the same width. Ditch the shitty arrow extension on the Y, and lose the one on the right side of the H too. Your D... Look at a D please. The bottom of a D does not go outwards, it comes back in. That's not a D. The R is the worst. It looks the your first Y, but upside down. Therefor shittier. Your O is whatever. It's simple, however all your lines are still crooked as fuck. DRAW STRAIGHT LINES! Your 3D is off just about everywhere. Ditch ass the colors and fills, and get your shit down before wasting ink. Once again go simple. Need inspiration? Look at your damn keyboard.
Edited: Width not length
PS you spelling BOMBING SCIENCE wrong
hahaha got emOriginally Posted by Flawless Victory
God damn . I asked for crits and i got them . lmfao . Idk how im gonna fix it .
You have the amazing power of adderall to thank for that my friend. Don't give up. Have fun with it.
I sell my adderal to idiots and i tell them its xanax . i make money . lmfao .
You can sell it to me and also make money.
lmmfao !!!!
How many do you want , for how much .
I'd much rather have adderall than xanax
WTF . why would you rather have adderall ?
Well, if it's IR.
You know that shit is an upper, right?
It's an amphetamine.
You should really learn more about the shit you are selling/putting in your body, dude.
Unless you are like 13, then fuck it, just take whatever your pediatrician recommends.
lay off the hydro dawgKiddy: I aint feelin it . all letters look the same .
lemme get some critss
also quick tip: bombing has a b after m.
i like hydros R
looks like he is playing hangman instead of drawing r's
LMFAAAAAO ! I like that one . and i know exactly what im puting into my body . I dont have the IR's cause those are for ADHD & Narcolepsy . I have the ER'S causee i only have ADHD .
Shit dude, ask for Desoxyn if you have ADD.
I had the flu a couple weeks ago, then I got better, but I haven't stopped coughing since... what do I take ?
^promethazine&codeine
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