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    thanks for the crits.

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    Yarbles just keep paintin and move the can faster to stop the drips bro.
    Ash I dig the H work with that style
    Asic stickers are sick Lemme see some of them painted...

    Anyways.. i screwed up the W i cant paint on my knees... haha


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    Quote Originally Posted by Scratch View Post


    I know its not good, critz? i need to improve it
    I still need crits. Damn im bad at throws =[

    617hit me up

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    assh that shits funny, always have extra with you.
    sneew that s is hiding, strighten that mother fuckers head up.


    crossin paths

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    old

    thats mines now.

  6. #1446

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    too much going on
    First Off You Know What It Is If You Heard Drake
    Making Ho's Wobble Like A Bridge In An Earthquake

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    naw man i was crossin took that shit and killed in the name of

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    sense- why? moes is alot better than you and unless you know him and are doing it for a joke, theirs no point, if you're gonna go over someone anyway then actually do a piece, dont put crappy lines and stuff inside his throw
    yaek- i counldnt actually tell what it said but guessing from what you write its ya, think of a new y and a, do your whole name and then for a shortened version just take away the e and k, your pink is very hard to see, that might be to do with the chrome or you mightve rushed it. if you rushed it then take your time next time, not so long that you get drips but dont be so rushed, it doesnt look like an extremely heated spot anyway, hit the books first
    snew- stick to chill spots for now and go simpler, the best letter is the e but its alot better than the other letters which says to me that it was either bit or heavily influenced by someone, the w is very generic but could look good if it was cleaner and the s and n are horrible and take the bit off of the bottom of the e
    aekz- you need to work on your can control big time, find a chill spot and just do simples, simples, simples to build up your control. your drop shadow is messy the letters get gradually smaller, dont worry about doing bubbles off to the side, keep working on that k and i dont like the little pointed bit, it can be pointed but i think the way it comes to a point doesnt look good, i prefered your older style
    asic- nicer than normal but try not to make the top of the s and i so pointed smooth it out a bit, try it with the drop shadow not going over the next letter and try to mix light colours with other light colours or vice versa when you're mixing colours because i cant make out the outline on some of them
    ash- its very, very dusty, your h is the only letter you should keep but take away that little tumour on the right side of it, hit the books and get a new a and s down, forget about the charac
    oak- you got some nice stuff watch the drips on the metal one, how did you get the seemingly floating one? truck? the one with the red forcefield is clean, overall a nice solid throw thats not trying to hard but try to keep all your pics in one post
    lasek- couldnt make out the a at all and the other letters are bad go alot simpler, the only kinda slightly good letter would be the a if you took off the tumour like thing, start back with simple bubbles
    snew again- see above
    edit: now thats what you call crits
    The best thing anyone can do style-wise on here is to leave.

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    New a
    and thanks alot for the crits man
    Good to see someone still gives good advice



    snew stand the s up move you w in and ust keep working on it
    I wouldn't hit frieghts just yet

    Edit nevermind moes I didn't read the whole sotry haha
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    cum to my trailer park an call juggalos gay,
    every motherfucker whos down with the clown will stomp ur ass

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    yoooo chek this shit bitch www.hit-them-hard.piczo.com

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    yarbles - leg on the k is too skinny and the top part of the s is too big.

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    Quote Originally Posted by letsgobombin View Post
    sense- why? moes is alot better than you and unless you know him and are doing it for a joke, theirs no point, if you're gonna go over someone anyway then actually do a piece, dont put crappy lines and stuff inside his throw
    yaek- i counldnt actually tell what it said but guessing from what you write its ya, think of a new y and a, do your whole name and then for a shortened version just take away the e and k, your pink is very hard to see, that might be to do with the chrome or you mightve rushed it. if you rushed it then take your time next time, not so long that you get drips but dont be so rushed, it doesnt look like an extremely heated spot anyway, hit the books first
    snew- stick to chill spots for now and go simpler, the best letter is the e but its alot better than the other letters which says to me that it was either bit or heavily influenced by someone, the w is very generic but could look good if it was cleaner and the s and n are horrible and take the bit off of the bottom of the e
    aekz- you need to work on your can control big time, find a chill spot and just do simples, simples, simples to build up your control. your drop shadow is messy the letters get gradually smaller, dont worry about doing bubbles off to the side, keep working on that k and i dont like the little pointed bit, it can be pointed but i think the way it comes to a point doesnt look good, i prefered your older style
    asic- nicer than normal but try not to make the top of the s and i so pointed smooth it out a bit, try it with the drop shadow not going over the next letter and try to mix light colours with other light colours or vice versa when you're mixing colours because i cant make out the outline on some of them
    ash- its very, very dusty, your h is the only letter you should keep but take away that little tumour on the right side of it, hit the books and get a new a and s down, forget about the charac
    oak- you got some nice stuff watch the drips on the metal one, how did you get the seemingly floating one? truck? the one with the red forcefield is clean, overall a nice solid throw thats not trying to hard but try to keep all your pics in one post
    lasek- couldnt make out the a at all and the other letters are bad go alot simpler, the only kinda slightly good letter would be the a if you took off the tumour like thing, start back with simple bubbles
    snew again- see above
    edit: now thats what you call crits


    Thanks for the critz man I stood on the roof of a truck for the yellow fill in and stood on a chainlink fence for the hollow blue one

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    Workin on it
    Last edited by Mr yarbles; 08-29-2008 at 07:53 AM.
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    cum to my trailer park an call juggalos gay,
    every motherfucker whos down with the clown will stomp ur ass

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    first time out of the books, woulndt have done it but i found a chill warehouse
    critz please
    Last edited by GETRAD; 08-27-2008 at 11:31 PM. Reason: image didnt post

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    older, but i like it.



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    dj3hac- i like that throw. poor quality but i can still see its pretty good. you should try addin colors
    yarbles-i like the new A its pretty nice an im feelin your S
    getrad-keep practicin man. you got potential




    sorry so big. i forgot to resize em. i changed my A an tweaked my L an E
    crits??

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    first try at critz
    leaks- iv been lurking the toy threads for a while, and your shit is def getting better, i just dont like the bottom of the L, its to short for me but what do i know

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    lets go- nah dude me and moes are tight.
    it really wasnt that serious i wasnt tryin to waste paint i didnt have at the time.
    it got the point across
    so yeah boyy

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    WOW leaks that is a huge improvement! props!

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    Quote Originally Posted by bowchicabowow View Post
    WOW leaks that is a huge improvement! props!
    thanks man. i took what all you guys were sayin to the head an put it on paper. you dont kno how much i practice my throws everyday. thanks for all the crits. i need to start fuckin wit new styles now an perfectin this throw


 

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