lawl hahaha wtf hehehe lol funneh jk omg rofl lmao brb tyt kthx bai
u guys are just the cutest little princesses playing with each other in the water arent you :P
lawl hahaha wtf hehehe lol funneh jk omg rofl lmao brb tyt kthx bai
u guys are just the cutest little princesses playing with each other in the water arent you :P
teeheehee does widdle phatty wanna join us?
sucka my balls....two time!
Nope.
the top one....instead of trying to "flatten" all of the letters at the bottom...round em out..and that curly thing on the top of the s, lose that, and on the A make something in the bubble to make it an A
deff top one my dudee.
Digi two-letters while in class.
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dope^^ those would be ill slaps also
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Last edited by H1P30N3R; 02-14-2011 at 01:38 PM.
Thanks homie. I've been making slaps lately, I need to invest in some nice printed ones or finally learn how to screenprint myself.
The first throw you posted is stronger than the second, which I would scrap for now. (in the first photo) The color combo isn't too appealing. I'd just go white and black for a bit. The P is a bit wider and taller than the rest of the letters. I've tried this practicing and you may benefit from this as well, break down your throws into BASIC shapes first (you can try to work backwards if you want. Meaning, start from the picture of your throw, then break it down into basic shapes) and learn to draw those basic shapes clean (which is another problem with your throws)
A bit longwinded, but those are my thoughts. Hopefully some of that helped.
those HE's are super dope...any crits guys??
thanks for the help yeah my shit lacks clean crisp lines I think it is a little more challenging for me because im a lefty so i dont get the view of how my letters are developing as i paint them. I've been doing my handys backwards because it helps to keep my letters tighter together and the same size. Got that idea from weedeater said he has a friend who is a lefty writer that does that. Anyway definitly take your advice your shit is always crisp
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what does your HE stand for nouveauP ?
I'm a lefty, too.And yeah, I definitely understand what you mean by not being able to tell how your letters are developing. Just keep working at it and that cleanliness will come. Don't be afraid to study typography and calligraphy either. Maybe attempt to emulate and create some blackletter (look it up) fonts.
Makehate- Looks really good to me. good letters, and, from what I can tell, clean lines. My only crit would be to make the F (and possibly the R, but it looks nice the way it is) more dominant. Solid, nonetheless. Looks like a sick handstyle, too. Props
And Phat, the HE stands for "HEKLER"
Last edited by NouveauP; 02-14-2011 at 04:44 PM.
any crits
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