well ive been at it for bout 15 mins and this is what i got so fargive crits
well ive been at it for bout 15 mins and this is what i got so far
i like that E more than U imma give that a tryOriginally Posted by Norfsuthr
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crits please
Maybe change up the S and L
crits please
bump for crits
slack your k needs a lot of work and it doesnt really fit with the sl.
slerp try making everything the same size. R is looking particularly weak
coloured now with some pens i racked form school lmao
NAH, the first one looks real nice, just make sure to fill evenly with cans or markers.
Crits please... I feel my G is my real weak spot... all crits welcome.
E: also, OZON(E) everyone telling you to wait is right to a certain degree, keep that stuff to the same spot like you have been saying, if you have a closed backyard and can set up a few pieces of drywall or fibreboard that would be perfect, practice, take crits and dump 30 cans onto that drywall/board and then you will be ready to leave something behind. I did the same thing, and I was eventually glad to start seeing my throws getting slowly buffed. I learned then that it is best to keep real low key (as it seems you have been) while in the beginning, then later you can hit all kinds of spots in style. Painting on drywall is fun anyway, just rack or get cheap paint.
Last edited by Dreg one; 04-02-2011 at 02:03 PM.
yeah those pens are weird but they'll colour over each over and sharpies and probably other pens too.
cit hard...
just had a micro can on me when I found this spot by mistake... so ignore the weakness :P
and these are from earlier tonight, the story from the chat thread hehe - bad quality pic warning:
props phat
choose your fav if you like em crits plz
@Phat: Haha, to be honest, I don't really see how these are classified as 'toy' per se. It's good work, liking it phat.
crits plz
Nay to the faces in the letters. Lose the bump or tumor (as some call it) on the "S". Close up your "E". I think you should find a different "L", but that's just me. Keep all of the letters level.
how is this
Slerp lose the dead space and make your letters the same size.
any thoughts on this one?
make the letters the same size i cant tell if thats an r or a c and your d is covering your a too muchany thoughts on this one?
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