taro its lookin solid
taro its lookin solid
There u go Slerp, it kinda sucks but idk
idk what your other one is
but the 1 you posted doesnt really have much flavor in my oppinion
on the top one ignore my shadowin the secound 1 im really not feelin my r
webs and mr.late
please keep your chat to a minimum or in each other's inboxes or take it to the chat thread
and if you MUST speak, either accompany your posts with flicks, or bunch up all you have to say in one post instead of flooding the thread
No problem Phat, and Slerp on the second one im not feeling the R or the P, but SLE are ok
Last edited by webs508; 04-07-2011 at 02:39 AM.
Hi, so I know for a fact I am toy as fuck.
PLEASE CRIT ME. Easiest was to get better is to know why your shit, eh?
If you want to keep this style i would say i like the A but the rest gotta go, I would personally say try another style, and keep it simple. Ive been writing for a little over 3 years and look at my throw
K, redid the throwie.
I agree about the A being the best developed aspect. I conformed the S a little to the A so it has a little better flow (i think), also took out the corners on the K, and just overall took out dead space (awesome game by the way).
Any ideas on anything from colour to flow, to detail or anything would be appreciated!
Looks way better, i still think the S needs a little work, and as far as colors go, this is just a throw so any colors that go together would work
OK, drew up a new one. Kind of bored.
The sizing on this one isn't great, kind of shrinks as it goes, and the R is none to my liking.
However, I feel like the S fits alot better, and the K is starting to look better too.
feelin the throw mone and selm with the nice character... 3rd would of like to see the throw w/o the red in it
...mone not feeling your m at all.Just something about the middle of it.
anyone down for an exchange?
New one. Tried to get them same height this time. any ideas for what i can do on the T?
make the letters the same size maybe try having the top of the T go over all the othe letters ur gunna have to mess around to find outr what works
New throwie, just started so this is pretty much draft 0.3
would love some crits,
I know the connector on the A kind of makes it less then legible, so I'm working on that.