Last edited by Phat 2; 04-04-2011 at 02:19 PM.
they're good and regular
not much to crit on raelly. nice job
Humr- your UM is ok, work on the H an R. That bottom purple h is a good one to develop.
thanks for the crits ,,ill work on that
crap throws a go go
Last edited by pointman; 04-04-2011 at 08:35 PM.
bottom 1 is aight, you gotta eliminate the negative space on the M tho. G is tight. L M S need some fixin
Lose the eyes (I think that's what you're going for).
Fix the right leg of the "R".
Thicken the "L" and "P".
Close up the gap in the "E" or try to do an uppercase.
Keep working with that "S".
well i got lazy n didnt fill in the shade and the X's arent placed well but other than that any better?
A little. You still have to fatten up that "P" and fix the right leg of the "R" because it looks awkward.
how is this lookin
wilbur-i like the blue one the most
Still have to mess around with the right leg of the "R".
The "L" is still super thin compared to everything else. Maybe thin out the other letters instead?
Lookin alot better wilbur
Wilbur- looks pretty dope to me
Dreg - not really too sure what to make of it, might be worth putting some other throw ideas up as well.
the s needs work looks like a letter for a straight the other letters jus look bland other than the c its pretty solid
i rather like the s in this one. T's a bit thin i think. Try to ignore my failure of a shading shading.
Lol used highlighters; crit hard please
is that suppose to be a U?