Throwies

[Phat 2]

i see potential in the top edit throw. you have the initial idea. but it need a LOOOOOOOOTA practice to get it down and grounded. but play around with it, yes?

[nah!]

something i been working on because i kinda lost my old throw style

[Sketchamus]

Yes Nah! im definatly feeling the N and H, especially the H on the bottom one, I think you should maybe bring the legs of the A's closer together to make the gap between them slimmer, overall looking nice though mate.

i see potential in the top edit throw. you have the initial idea. but it need a LOOOOOOOOTA practice to get it down and grounded. but play around with it, yes?

Thanks man, that was the one i liked the most, but yeah as you said it definatly needs a lot of work to finalise it. Cheers for the feedback mate.

[LeanOne]

nah - either your N is too wide, or your A & H are too thin. you decide brother.

[pointman]

Cheers Phat that was dope that S is really nice

[LeanOne]

glums - you see how the G bends in ? i think you should either make it straight like the rest of the letters, or make the rest of the letters bend in. it would flow more imo.

lean throwie -



skeng exchange -

[dankbudz]

first time postin here, this is probably my 5th or 6th time painting

[mekosbc]

[ChadWarden]

your e looks a little silly and the right half of your k needs a weight loss plan, but overall not so bad.

i wouldnt say you need to change anything major, just smooth out what you already have.







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[H1P30N3R]

[Eclectic Boogaloo]

meko i think the extension on the left of the m should go, and that you should just fatten up theat leg, also maybe try to do something more with the O, i know its hard.
hipe i dont like that P, also its kinda hard to see everything.
crits?

[MASE P_2s]

^^^ whats the 3rd letter?

[ribcage]

its an R, a really bad R.....

[Eclectic Boogaloo]

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lol.
i think this ones better, NY fats yo. i gotta work on my R's though, i know that

[ribcage]

H isnt that great but other than the R the rest is aight

[mindtrix350]

:/

[MASE P_2s]

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lol.
i think this ones better, NY fats yo. i gotta work on my R's though, i know that

yo no offence but that r is straight ass it completly ruins the rest of the throwy

[StephenRL]

Workin' on my throwie,

[MASE P_2s]

crits?

[Eclectic Boogaloo]

thanks you guys. ive been having trouble with a R uppercase wasnt working for me. ill probably try dropping the line on the left side of it
mase that bottom one is better, the lower case e is too fat
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